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I love this poem. The analogy of someone leaving their mark behind on someone they hurt is perfect! It perfectly reflects the way that people feel after someone has hurt ...

Hi YumnaAzeez, This is a really deep piece and I really enjoyed reading it! The rhyming is quite subtle and I thought that it made the poem flow very nicely. ...

I really like this poem! The rhyming is perfect and the I love the metaphor. If I understand it correctly it is a person pretending to be happy and kind ...

I love this poem! The metaphor is beautiful and is such good imagery. The one thing I would say about this is that in the line "And somehow, a trench ...

Hi! I like this poem and I think (as the other reviewers have mentioned) it is very relatable. It shows how when people ask us to define ourselves, sure we ...

This poem is really nice. It's short but deep and those are the poems that get people thinking the most. I like how you went from a philosopher to an ...