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Hi I won't be reviewing this fully as a lyric, and instead as a poem and try to understand the miracle art of lyric. *1* The moon, she falls down ...

Hi, I don't like giving short review, but I'm having quite a fate to face now...which the result will be severe to me and the saddest part is, I can't ...

Hi, There are quite interesting twists in this that caught my eyes which is quite hard for me lately. *1* Why did you die? Why did you make me cry? ...

Hi, That was short... Anyway, I enjoy this...but I don't know how should I review this... (Guess, I'm still doing it.) One by one... >_< Prologue This is the girl, ...

HI!!!!! *catching my breath* Finally! I'm here; I'm so sorry because I couldn't do this soon. I was so deeply involve in poetry's world that I didn't really care to ...

Hi, Sorry, I don't quite understand about all this symbolism, but I can relate them somehow, and I think that's understandable (because these symbolism sounds too forced...), and this story ...

Hi Good and sweet story. A one word for this review is, "Creative". You've written quite a flawless story with a really nice setting and little story. Captivating, but poor, ...

Hi Too many questions are bad, you know? Although, I'm in love with your new style, perhaps. Everything is pretty elaborated, but the cliffhanger parts. The details and images are ...

Hi~ This is so sensitive for me! (I'm saddened...) **The Review's Starting** *takes a deep breath* You begin this story by making questions to the readers like, why she need ...

Hi. Uhuks? **Review's Starting** I am agreed to every reviews made up here. Anyway, don't you think there are lots of dialogue here? Not to blame you, I made even ...

Hi, Sorry, this is quite a pretty late review... ^^ **Review's Starting** I like the italicized paragraph. Like the previous reviewer said that it draws we into the story. I ...

Hi, Interesting start. **Review's Starting** You started in kinda awkward style. Not that it is boring. Nor great... The edge of the world you used caught my attention. Is it ...

Hi, Green... Aww... **Review's Starting!** A simple poem, such as yours, caught my eyes. I love on how people explain a single thing into prose of poetry. Indeed, green brought ...

Hi, I hate you; that is a good news! Anyway, a little, blunt nitpick... becasue See~! **The Review's Starting!** First thing's first, I don't understand this. I know your motive ...

Hi. Aww... That's awful. **Review starts here** Like our previous reviewer here said, I especially love how it's written from a young child's viewpoint!! Double exclamation marks aside, I agree ...