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Hi, First and foremost, your poem was good and you know what: I love oceon! Oh! Welcome to YWS! It was simple but it explained much. But try to remember: ...

Big mistake! Dear Readers, I will add some more to it whenever I get time. You should put something to make this apart from the poem. Anyway, hi, your poem ...

Hi. interesting word to make a poem. I'm sorry because I'll start with this; Overall! Your poem was a good-stuff but yes I'll had to agree with your previous reviews ...

Hi, This was pretty eerie, right? Do you agreed with me? And an early reminder: A poem didn't only consisted of hard or shabby words. Yeah this was the same ...

Hi. Whoa what was this. A story about what? Nah.. Just kidding. Here what I found in this story: As I slowly ascended the steps of the church his body ...

Hi. A tragic story. (sob..sob..sob) A thing or two to correct. No, not a vampire. A warewolf! You meant 'werewolf', right? By the way, I love vampire more. XD (Never ...

Hi. This was a great essay or story or whatever you called it but description essay was the best for this situation. It was very captivating story that grabbed my ...

Hi. This story was pretty interesting with all the fairy-thing. I like the way you made all the humors. You should change the genre, general to humor because it was ...

Hi. Before I review, I must say: Welcome to YWS! I love this simple story and the way you described about almost anything in this story. However, you still left ...

Hi, the flow of this story was very nice and soothing because of its normal and realistic story flow, although, I don't know what is the meaning, though. I think ...

Hi. A nice advise and a good story you had written. I like it. On with the review. I'll tell you almost everything that seemed to be weird. First, the ...

Hi. This was your first work, right? It was good. I promised you to read your story, right and I've done it. Haha. Anyway, on with the review. Your idea ...

Hi. I was sorry to hear that. XD Anyway, continuing with my review: You have a great story with all the interesting plots you created within this story. I'm sorry ...

Hi. Your story was good but still, you misspelled the word prologue as prolouge. However, this prologue was somewhat a spoiler especially this bracket: ["whom is the true criminal that ...

Hi. I know this thing is quite old but Shakespeare's are much older. I like it and probably will read this aloud every night when I'm going to bed. I ...