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hi. here's a review> i love the poem. everything is very beautiful with the usage of highly descriptive words~ a quick grammar nitpick: the cluttered remains of our favorite memory ...

Hi, won't be commenting much on the mechanic. The story started with a typical modern shounen mc, ok I guess. For me, you don't really need to explain A-Z about ...

Hi, I am gonna leaving a quick review, so brace the speed. >_< First Impression, this poem conveyed meaning on what you trying to describe at the moment and the ...

Hi, When I am on this site, I will try to review the latest poem posted and the lucky person is you. A glimpse on the poem, there are two ...

hi, i love the touch in this poem on how much soft that the words flow and leave the readers a room to reevaluate themselves which is important to include ...

Good name. Here I came from the reviewing request thread. Okay, I don't know whether I can "actually" comment more on your poem as your previous reviewers had reviewed them ...

Hi, This is a really worthwhile read like seriously it is a good. I am just going to leave you some quick comments about the some part you specifically mentioned. ...

Hi, I'd tried NaPo this year and I gracefully failed halfway. Okay, haha, never mind that. Your poem is, for me, so indulging even though it was a short nice ...

Hi, I have no introduction; hitherto, I love your avatar. Cute. In a skimmed read, your poem is so nice and honest and I really can't say this, but I ...

So Hi. (Brief intro, I know.) If i repeat anything from the previous review, don't report me for plagiarism. Thanks for that. Gonna be inside your poem without being too ...

Nice reread. I liked it when you actually "did" putting emotions like angry and embarrassment like below. The creature's eyes squint angrily. "No, S, H, A, I. Shai!" the creature ...

On your request (I am referring to the PM's you gave to me ;) ), I will give you some commenting. "This place is huge!" Gabrielle says , looking on ...

(short review warning...) Nice, and I feel this is almost like a spoken word poem (because of the length and the more on the narrative part.) Love the way you ...

I don't quite get what you are trying to convey with these 'i's and 'I's. Stick to one is better to avoid overthinking over things that means the same. (or ...

hmmmm, sounds cliche, but i blame myself for reading and playing too much fantasy story. ~my thought This chapter is better than the previous original vers. and I am quite ...