fruityfortissimo

Wow. This poem was simply beautiful. i could definetly feel your passion and emotion in this piece. This is raw. That crumpled green line offers false hope, This is a ...

Hey! I love this poem! I'm a sucker for a good haiku (forgive me if i spelled that wrong) and I love how this poem gives a general idea that ...

Wow this poem is really cute. She has eyes never seen before This line does justice to represent the character's innocence. Someone said in the review that it sounded like ...

It was lovely. it’s a bit like clockwork, the way she Okay i absolutely love the first two lines. A good hook. moves through the quadrants of her tidy little ...

This piece was beautiful. It was very original and creative. I loved your use of personification. I saw a tree move I don't know about this line. It seems to ...

This is so adorable I love it! Hey. Here, a poem. xD Hope you like it, but tear it apart if you want. ;) Silly me, I'm back here, again ...

Haha I am not confused, but its probably because I took this poem and interpreted it in my own way. I love this poem because I can relate. Its simple ...

Oh my gosh this poem is absolutely amazing I loved it! I think the flow and the rhyme scheme is perfect and I love how you put so much of ...

Hahahah I love this! MONSTERS! :) It was very creative and Represents scared children everywhere! I think that this is the one thing that we all felt as little kids ...

Very creative. I like that you acknowledge the fact that being a write set us apart from everyone else! Nobody ever does and its about time! I love how you ...

Wow. This poem is just absolutely amazing. I have absolutely no criticism. It is so twisted and demented yet....beautiful. I desperately want to know what the purpose of this poem ...

Wow. That was EXCELLENT. It was kind of, I don't know, demented? It had this haunted atmosphere to it that really added a pained effect. At first I didn't really ...

I liked this poem because it was very quick and straight to the point. I loved your extended metaphor. The only part that bothered me was where it said, fluttering ...

This is great! I love your whole fight fire with fire line. Very true. All these reasons are valid and very agreeable. The fact that it has all the perks ...

Oh my gosh you are just a genius!!!!! I could not stop laughing the entire time! Immediatly I could tell this story would be immensly hilarious and it was! The ...