The tree Ballet

Hi there, Niko! I'm finally here- sorry it took me so long.
Okay, so I'm going to make a couple of points, and then head right into a line-by-line critique.
1. Structure:
For some reason, I always find this type of spacing really awkward to read. It makes the piece feel infinitely long, and a little bit disconnect. Each line feels like it should stand alone when they're spaced out so widely. I know this seems like a lot to take away from stanza aesthetics, but they really are important. Below, I have removed your spacing and separated it into stanzas. Please keep in mind that these aren't definite changes, but are simple suggestions, maybe even guidelines for the future.
I separated it into stanzas because while the spaced out look is somewhat intimidating, so is the "big black dense wall of black" look. It's better to condense and then spread it out in a few selected areas to lessen intimidation altogether.

2. Punctuation:
You don't really have punctuation here. Punctuation is important, mostly for one reason: flow. This allows the reader to pick up on the flow of your words, and pay attention to the context more than anything else. If you don't have punctuation, it often leaves the reader floundering in your lines, wondering, "Where is the intonation, the emphasis? Is it all important? Where do I go, where does this thought end, where does the next begin?"
Punctuation can be done several ways. Personally, I'm a fan of punctuating my poetry as I would a paragraph, though it really is up to you.

Okay: I've covered those things. Now to the critique.

I saw a tree move
It glides back and forth In order to help the flow here, I would say "gliding" instead of "it glides". This allows your last thought to continue directly onto the next line, easing this into one tone without any jarring.
Vertically expressing its horizontal desire; it started to dance Nice placement of your semi-colon. The first clause in this line though, feels a bit awkward. The words "vertically" and "horizontal", while providing nice parallelism, don't really seem to fit the tone and word choice of this poem.
The wind making its movements legal "legal" feels like kind of an awkward word here
Its slender arms (comma here? though tough comma here?are gliding smoothly up and I really like this line!

Carelessly

Descend

Downwards
I spaced out the previous three lines-- I really like the concept and shape you conveyed here. Really interesting use of structure, and I really think it works, though you might considering why you want so much emphasis here. Is it key to the poem or something?

as though all its energy is now dried up You are trying to convey a feeling of immortality and vitality in the next line, yes? Why then are you using this imagery, which immediately makes me think of dried up and brittle leaves?
Its bright ever green leaves wink at me Love the personification here
Capturing my undivided attention This line feels a bit awkward here. I think that if you want to keep it, you should allow some more imagery into it, to make it more powerful.
Drawing me into its ballet

I stand across from it, examining this tree
This tree of life, energy, movement I think you could remove the repeated "this tree".
All which radiates off and embraces onlookers But what exactly is it radiating?
All I see when I look at this tree is

You Nice emphasis.

Your energy, your life, your movement
Where I found my comfort I think that we need visuals of a place for you to say this: it sounds weird and it's hard to imagine someone finding comfort in someone else's movement if you don't provide imagery.
My save refuge once taken for granted
The ever-green leaves from its tree, broken I don't really understand this line.
Now I return to you in the form of these words
That were left unspoken.

Hi there thank you so much for your review on my poem:) just wanted to thank you for the corrections i have adjusted them:) and i apretiate it and also wanted to explain the first line, i know it seems like a dull line but this poem was written for a friend that i lost through a silly argument and then i regained that friend again and we were talking about poetry and i said i can write a poem about anything so she said ok start a poem with "I saw a tree move" and so i did and she became my tree and this poem became a tribute to her:) and the fact that i used "evergreen leaves" again is to show that the friendship has not changed and that it is still exactly the way it used to be:) and the three adjectives on its on gives the image on the it "decending"...A lot of things that you guys have picked out as errors are actually done on purpose but im sure you did not understand it till i explained:) but i do thank you guys:)

This piece was beautiful. It was very original and creative. I loved your use of personification.

I saw a tree move I don't know about this line. It seems to ordinary and dry. It doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. Not a good level of energy so it doesn't really hook the reader.

It glides back and forth

Vertically expressing its horizontal desire; it started to dance

The wind making its movements legal

Its slender arms though tough are gliding smoothly up and

Carelessly

Descend

Downwards

as though all its energy is now dried up

Its bright ever green leaves wink at me It should be evergreen

Capturing my undivided attention

Drawing me into its ballet

I stand across from it, examining this tree

This tree of life, energy, movement

All which radiates off and embraces onlookers

All I see when I look at this tree is

You

Your energy, your life, your movement

Where I found my comfort

My save refuge once taken for granted

The ever-green leaves from its tree, broken Once again it should be evergreen, but I think you should edit this line. Hearing evergreen again sounded repetative.

Now I return to you in the form of these words Very original. Well done.

That were left unspoken.

I liked this. It was different.
I do however, believe it could be more powerful, I like the detail but I do think it was slightly lacking. I could feel my attention wander slightly.
The structure was nice though. It was different and refreshing and it did also fit with the poem itself.
A beautiful piece.
Well done.

Well I'll start with saying this is my first review; I hope I have some useful insight for you.

I can definately grasp the foundation of various imagery used to help deliver a message. However, I am left feeling unsure of what you mean to convey in this piece. My overall impression after reading it, is that you took the time to describe imagery of a "dancing" tree to convey the simplicity in natural beauty that is so often overlooked.

Its bright ever green leaves wink at me

The ever-green leaves from its tree, broken

My save refuge once taken for granted

I saw a tree move

It glides back and forth

Vertically expressing its horizontal desire; it started to dance

The wind making its movements legal

Its slender arms though tough are gliding smoothly up and

Carelessly

Descend

Downward

You