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AWWWWW!!! ^-^ :)

Ohhh ok I get it now! :) And thank you!

THANKS!!!!! Much Appreciated!!!

Thanks for the advice! :)

Thanks for the advice!

Awwww!!!! Thanks! :) :p

You were pretty much spot on. It is when being a child all you do is whatever pleases you. When You get older you forget the pleasures and small things ...

that was supossed to be a review not a comment.... but ok :/ O_o :)

This is a very good start. I really want to see where it goes. BUT- The sentences are a little choppy. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose, ...

I really like this. The title was interesting, and so was the rest of the poem. I loooove the last stanza! :) It has a certain flow to it which ...

Its just describing the experience from a different point of view.

Yeah personally I like ambiguity. My favorite poets are William Carlos William and Emily Dickinson. But I do get what you're saying. I just like to let the reader find ...

hehe thanks! I've never been one for punctuation.

Dawww :p Thanks sweety! And I will never stop writing, even if I'm paralyzed....

Hehe I know how you feel. I hate when there's nothing I can say to improve some one's writing. Don't worry I've learned not to take compliments about my writings ...