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I think I'll just take that part out. It wasn't my favorite part anyways. Thanks :)

I'm not sure if this is frowned upon, but the meaning of the last part is... [spoiler] You know how sometimes you read a poem that's titled something totally unrelated ...

Mike, Rae is actually based off my dad's girlfriend. xD She literally calls him Poppa Bear, and it creeps me out so much. And as unrealistic as it seems, everything ...

Deifyance, I'm actually Canadian xD But, I was going to, but it didn't seem very fast in m/h, so I decided I might as well make it sound fast. For ...

xD Nice. Like Antigone, I suck at poetry reviews. But I liked this xD I totally pictured some skinny kid with black hair, a sullen face, and an expressionlless voice ...

*tear, tear. Sniffle, sniffle.* This is a really cute poem. I don't think I can clean it up. There's nothing to clean up! Great job! - A

Yes, the missing baby on the Titanic's body was never found. I switched it up a little, because really Trevor went missing instead of Loraine, but I really wanted to ...

That was priceless. Hilarious! xD My favorite part: "Forks." "Spoons?" Because my friend called the Quillette (however you spell it) reservation spoons xD. I don't know, it just made me ...

Sorry! I was trying to get it all down quickly, so it got a little bland at the end. Sometimes I get caught up in my own stories and can't ...

I agreee with xxcarly. There were a few grammar mistakes and it was a little robotic. Make it seem real. Create vivid images.

I agree with Meep. Good ol' Switzerland.

I'm actually reading Uglies right now, and I'm just at the part with the Smoke. But, this is based on a dream I had, so I must've been thinking about ...

Honestly, you're probably the best thirteen year old poet I know. You work always gets to me. You can't improve perfection. Keep writing. You, my friend, have some real talent. ...

This is awesome. I loved the whole cliche thing. I don't think I caught one error. Great job!

what's the twilight upside-down contest? can someone PM me about that? i already commented your other copy, but props, my friend, for successfully making me pee my pants over something ...