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This is a cute story you have, darling! Thanks for using my thread! Since, you didn't specify what review, I'm going to guess that you wanted an overall view...There weren't ...

Dudette, you have so many excellent reviews already, so forgive me if this seems a bit repetitive...Oh, and thanks for using my thread! :D :arrow: Imagery - As I'm sure ...

Yay! First request!! :D I Nitpicks Heat blazed down onto the black asphalt that laid, empty and barren, in front of me. I would prefer on instead of onto...And, as ...

'Kay Climber, sorry for the extremely slow review. I'll be a lot faster next time! To make up for it, this review is going to be extremely long & hopefully ...

This was so sad! :( I can't believe that the child dies. 'Kay so I do kinda have a review for you this time instead of a long list of ...

'Kay Em, I'm laughing way too hard to give this a proper review. So, I'll be back later when I stop laughing to actually review this! So, for now, gold ...

'Kay so 'pparently all the other reviewers got all the grammar stuff down. The thing that really bothered me about this poem was the rhyme scheme. It sounds really forced, ...

Hm, I'd have to say Across 5 Aprils by Irene Hunt. That book was so stretched out and nothing happened! I'm not sure what exactly made it so bad. Just ...

It's a really interesting idea and your portrayal of it is great! I think that you deleted the rhyme scheme, and put it in free verse now right? Because I ...

Heyy Dudette! I feel like all I've done is nitpick your stories so I'm gonna leave those for someone else to do! So, here's all the concept-ish stuff : Mechanics ...

Heyy! I love this poem...I wish I could write something like this..Anywayz, the only real thing that I saw that was wrong with this poem was that it kept switching ...

This is really well-written and I couldn't find any nitpicks...But, I didn't really understand why in the beginning it says they had caught up to the MC talking about her ...

Haha! I loved this!! It's absolutely adorable and the word "sparkology" made me crack up! His whole class laughed at his lack of sparkology. Bryce did not know what to ...

**stares in shock** WOW! That was a really good poem!! Amazing job on this, I haven't read anything like that in a while...**slowly calms down enough to actually review this** ...

Wow, I am absolutely speechless...This is amazing and conveys the feelings of the writer soo well...The only two nitpicks I really had with this were the lines : Sorry, hun; ...