Jusyt another goofy little song I decided to write. In a sudden burst of inspiration/bordem, this song was created, though punctuation was not included, so that may need help.
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I browsed the Young Writer’s Forum,
I looked at a poll or two.
When suddenly I felt dumb,
‘Cause on every poll, I saw you.
Oh Patrick Buchanan,
Who are you?
Nobody knows who you are,
But everyone’s heard of your name.
People near, and people far,
It’s forever embedded in our brains.
I asked around to see who you were,
But the people I asked didn’t know.
So I Googled you just to be sure,
Because I knew that that wouldn’t be slow.
I clicked on the link that went to your site,
Went to “Biography” and I read,
But what it said gave me such a fright,
You’re a journalist and politician who’s color is red.
Oh Patrick Buchanan,
“The truth hurts” is painfully true.
Turns out you’re a conservative Republican.
Oh what can I do?
Nobody knows who you are,
But everyone’s heard of your name.
People near, and people far,
It’s forever embedded in our brains.
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Hi there,
I read this, because the title intrigued me and I was definitely not disappointed. While you frequently rhyme it always goes with the flow and not in one place you over rhyme. The flow was sometimes a little off, but that's okay, since this isn't meant to be a work of perfection, but a humorous ode to Pat.
Very original, very well executed. Someone should advertise this a little bit ^_^
Keep writing things like this!
All the best,
~Kalliope
'Kay Em, I'm laughing way too hard to give this a proper review. So, I'll be back later when I stop laughing to actually review this! So, for now, gold star for you! And, Pat Buchanan's a Republican?!?! So, like 23% of the people on YWS are Republicans? But, these people are supposed to be smart, and Republicans are icky! How dare they make him a choice on that poll thingie. Anywayz, great job on this! It was sheer awesomeness, as twin said.
fluteluvr77<3
P.S. I promise I'll actually review/nitpick this later!
Haha, Em, this is awesomeness. I can't even give you a proper crit 'cause I'm laughing too hard. Ebil Pat Buchanan!