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  • Other » Health, Realistic Re: Depression: Monopoly, Snakes and Ladders

    I'm not sure if what you've written here is a personal account, or if it's fiction. I'm going to review it under the assumption that it's a true account, though, ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look at Me

    So, I just found this after reviewing your most recent poem (Summer Gin), and I wasn't going to leave another review right away, because I don't want to seem like ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Summer Gin

    Hi Maverick, I've got to say, I really like this piece. I'm not usually a fan of more structured, rhyming poetry, but this works so nicely. The rhymes are so ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: you killed mommy

    Hi Tobiah, Wow. You definitely weren't kidding about this being dark. I love it! It's so... eerie. I can definitely tell it's written from a child's perspective. The only time ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: loosely

    Hi Crysi, I don't actually have anything resembling constructive criticism to say here. I just really enjoyed reading this. It has a great rhythm to it; I can imagine someone ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: My Mask

    Hi Delirium, This is a great piece! I really like the formatting - aesthetically, it just looks pretty on the page. It reads so nicely too; it's got a great ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: no story here

    Noelle, This is such a pretty, quietly heartbreaking poem. It wasn't until about midway through that I started to realize that it wasn't a simple love poem. The first few ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Comfort

    Hi, Meandbooks! This is a beautiful poem. The subject is so deceptively simple. Like, on one level, it's just about a quilt, but I feel like it goes so much ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: learning to drown

    To be honest, I'm not much of a reviewer - I know what I like and dislike, but I struggle with putting it into words. But here goes anyway. I ...

    May 21, 2015


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