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Re: Depression: Monopoly, Snakes and Ladders
I'm not sure if what you've written here is a personal account, or if it's fiction. I'm going to review it under the assumption that it's a true account, though, ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Look at Me
So, I just found this after reviewing your most recent poem (Summer Gin), and I wasn't going to leave another review right away, because I don't want to seem like ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Summer Gin
Hi Maverick, I've got to say, I really like this piece. I'm not usually a fan of more structured, rhyming poetry, but this works so nicely. The rhymes are so ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: you killed mommy
Hi Tobiah, Wow. You definitely weren't kidding about this being dark. I love it! It's so... eerie. I can definitely tell it's written from a child's perspective. The only time ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: loosely
Hi Crysi, I don't actually have anything resembling constructive criticism to say here. I just really enjoyed reading this. It has a great rhythm to it; I can imagine someone ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: My Mask
Hi Delirium, This is a great piece! I really like the formatting - aesthetically, it just looks pretty on the page. It reads so nicely too; it's got a great ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: no story here
Noelle, This is such a pretty, quietly heartbreaking poem. It wasn't until about midway through that I started to realize that it wasn't a simple love poem. The first few ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Comfort
Hi, Meandbooks! This is a beautiful poem. The subject is so deceptively simple. Like, on one level, it's just about a quilt, but I feel like it goes so much ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
To be honest, I'm not much of a reviewer - I know what I like and dislike, but I struggle with putting it into words. But here goes anyway. I ...
May 21, 2015
