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Hey, OniiChan here! Ok, to be honest, this made zero sense. But just like @Radrook said, it’s a form of literary nonsense. I kinda find this surreal in a way, ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! I reviewed drops as well, you seem to enjoy poems about rain! :) Great poem. I love how this poem is telling how rain can be therapeutic, ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! This is a very deep poem. I think you used poetry very well to describe a story of a man who goes from his kids to drugs ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Rain is a very interesting topic for poetry. I think you did really well on this poem. I like how the second stanza gives off a feeling ...

Hey Onii-Chan here! I see you wrote a love poem :3 cute! I feel like this poem would be something out of a love song, which is great, yet it ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Wow, this was deep. I’m a bit bipolar so I can partially relate. I love how you used a virus in a computer to compare with your ...

Hey, Onii Chan here! As a bisexual boi, this means a lot. The way you described sexuality, and specifically gender identity, is great. Using the two colors and then saying ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Great poem, I loved those things as I grew up! I really loved your adjectives. The way you wrote this poem makes it feel surreal, almost. The ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! I love how poetic this is. I always enjoy romantic poems and love letters because of all the emotion that is captured in them. I think you ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! This is a great poem, I love the flow of it especially! I used to live in Washington DC, and every year we went to see them. ...

Hey Onii-Chan here! I liked this story, because in my opinion, prison escape is an underrated topic for a story. I really liked how you kept it simple and straightforward, ...

Hey, Onii-Chan here! Thanks for requesting I review this! I found this very interesting. I find it particularly cool how the prologue has such attention to detail. The story itself, ...

Hey Onii-Chan here! I’ll tell you this: I love cats. My grandparents have a bunch of farm cats and I’ve seen 12 hour old kittens grow all the way up ...

Hey Onii-Chan here! Great poem! I love how normally people would have the poet be the person, but instead you chose to be the animal. It’s great how you showed ...

Hey Onii-Chan here! You have a great gift, and using it to move people and create awareness in this way is astonishing. I love how you applied word families and ...