felistia

thank you very much.

thank you for your review, it is very helpful. I have changed the sentences and it looks much better.

Fixed. It looks much better now thanks for the review

thank you

Nice poem. I really like the theme. One complaint, I had trouble reading the fall apart bit. Other wise it is great.

Thank you for the info. I know that my dialogue is not the best and the more comments I get on how to fix it, the better it will get. ...

thank you

Thanks for the review. I love your idea and will apply the suggestion tomorrow. thank you again.

Thank you for the advice. I really like to rhyme, so I won't give it up

much better.

Oh forgot to mention that the chapter you read before will happen later and it will be almost the same. I worked on that description for ages and will not ...

Wow I didn't know that I was on the board. I will apply the changes to my chapter immediately. I have posted some poems as well. I would love if ...

Thanks for the review I have applied what you said and it is going great. The first chapter is now completely different and is earlier on in the story like ...

It is a pleasure, I am pretty new around here to, so welcome.

Okay, I will apply the change. Thanks for the review