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Re: At the edge of vision
Hi fortis, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, happy review day. The story: There isn't much of a story per say here, but the descriptions in here ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: merely a Mist?
Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story you presented in here is interesting, but a little confusing. I'm not ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Triple Kham - Chapter 1
Hi Miniskirt, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story was simple but interesting. I am not sure where you are ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Cold Killer Chapter #1
Hi Enflicted, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story was quite engaging and interesting. You presented a good hook in ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 7
Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story is great, but I can see that it is starting to ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 6
Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story is still getting better and better, but seems to be slowing ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Missouri
Hi Morrigan, Felistia here with a short review on your short piece. Firstly happy review day. Now on with the review. It is not the best for the shortness of ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Popularity Contest
Hi KingQueenKnave, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story was fairly simple, but nice to read. It was a bit ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: For All The Miseducated Dandies
Hi blueorchid, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day and welcome to YWS. The story: I liked the theme of the poem and the ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Old Woman who Lived in a shoe
Hi GusG, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story I find is very original and has a very funny twist ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Two Trolls
Hi FerranWright, Felistia here with a review on your latest poem. Firstly happy review day. Now on with the review. I love that you described the woman as trolls, it ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Certain
Hi KingQueenKnave, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly happy review day. Now on with the review. This poem feels a little to repetitive to be a poem, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Beach houses
Hi Stranger, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly happy review day. Now on with the review. I find this poem a little confusing, like really confusing. The ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The One in The Box
Hi Holysocks, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly happy review day. Now on with the review. There are a lot of repetitive words in here and ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: inferno
Hi mintanchor, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, happy review day. Now on with the review. I love that the whole poem is structured around fire, if ...
Nov 29, 2015