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Re: Death's Reign: Chapter I
Hi AliceAfternoon, Felistia here with a quick review for you since other's have pointed out pretty much everything for you. :D Plot: The plot as I see it so far ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Hi BlueJayWalker10, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Sorry about taking so long to get another review in, but I should be able to ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Don't Feed the Skeletons
Hello carmenbluestar (that name is quite a mouthful. :D), Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D This poem is very short, so some of the ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Chapter 2: The Old & The New
Hi AliceAfternoon, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: The story is advancing nicely and I like the character Elodie so far. For most ...
Mar 12, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Part V)
Hi ErikaHale, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Quick note: Sorry about being so late to review this. Life's been a bit busy lately. ...
Mar 12, 2016 -
Re: Blue Eyes
Hi FearlessLove4, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: So the theme you chose is a bit over used, but you seemed to make ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Shades of Blue
Hi ScarletARose, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Quick note: Welcome to YWS, I hope you have fun on the site. :D Theme: This ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: The Myth- Chapter eight; I'm really not good at focusing!
Hi WriterKitty, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: So we found out this time that Joe has the ability to for fire and ...
Mar 8, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Chapter 1: 9 Years Later
Hi MadWriter, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: Okay so first off, this chapter presented us with the start to what sounds like ...
Mar 7, 2016 -
Re: Redemption- Chapter
Hi Sarah12, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: I am really glad that you decided to throw me right into the main plot ...
Mar 5, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1 [Original Draft, Absolute Garbage]
Hi BlueJayWalker10, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: The story at the moment is quite entertaining and I like the little part at ...
Mar 4, 2016 -
Re: White Wolf
Hi harry576, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: Normally when people write about wolves they depict them as wild savage animals, but you ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: A Poet's Poem
Hi lyricalrebel, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really love this theme and the way you laid it out. Some people may ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: Ryu, a poem for you
Hi TahaT11n, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Sorry if this review is a bit short. I am a bit tired. :D Theme: This ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
Hi Madwriter, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: This is a great start to the story. It had me sitting on the edge ...
Mar 1, 2016