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Re: Shattered Spring
Hi shatteredspring, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: I really like the fact that you used spring as the ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep book 1 Chapter 3
Hi jessiebear, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D A quick grammar and punctuation check, then onto the good stuff. When they got to the ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: The Myth-Chapter nine; The new tour guide
Hello writerkitty, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: So in this chapter I felt that you where expanding on the characters and showing ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep book 1 Chapter 2
Hi jessiebear, Felistia here with another review for you on this wonderful night. :D Okay so first, I'm going to do a spell and grammar check for you. Then we'll ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Morning Meadow
Hello Jessiebear, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful evening. :D So as the previous reviewers said, you sentence structure is repetitive. I also thought that the ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep Book 1 Chapter 1
Hello jessiebear, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful evening. :D So for the most of this review I'm going to help you make your sentences flow ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown III
Hello GreatKing, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. This is going to be a short review since your chapter was a bit shorted than ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown II
Hello GreatKing, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. Story plot: Just like last time, your story flow is still great, but I do have ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown I
Hello GreatKing, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. Story plot: Already you are off to a fantastic start with the plot of you story ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 5 [Original Draft]
Hello BlueJayWalker10, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. Story plot: So this was another great chapter with an excellently written fight scene [the best ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 2 *
Hi tigeraye, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: Okay so my theory was kind of right about him recovering and then going to ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 1 *
Hi tigeraye, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: I'm not sure what the overall plot of the story is going to be, but ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Astorian Tales - Part 2
Hi Messenger, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful evening. :D Sorry about the unforgivable lateness. I hope the review will make it up to you. :D ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 4
Hi BlueJayWalker10, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful evening. :D Story plot: The story is thickening nicely and has plots and characters coming in from all ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3
Hello BlueJayWalker10, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story plot: So the plot as advanced dramatically and we are presented with the main problem ...
Apr 18, 2016