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Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 1
Hi Necromancer14 I'm back again for another short review on the chapter. I'm glad you got right into things by the end of the first chapter. I was kinda worried ...
May 15, 2020 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Prologue
Hi Necromancer14 Here to read your story. Love this opening. It's certainly got me hooked. I'm anxious to read the next chapter and I've got 11 to read. Lucky me. ...
May 15, 2020 -
Re: Chapter One
Hi there, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. Nitpicks: I had one or two issues with this chapter so let's get that out of the ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: New Prologue to my book
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. I was instantly drawn into this chapter when I clicked on it. You have a great beginning hook ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Town of Terrors, Chapter 1-3
Hi there, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. Nitpicks: Just going to go over a few spell \ grammar mistakes here before we start. Daria ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: The Sock That Picked Favorites
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D I didn't catch any spell or grammar mistakes so it looks all good on that front. The ...
Apr 16, 2020 -
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Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Just realized that you and @EthanHoover are writing this together. Cool. Nit-picks Always take a sturdy vessel ...
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: Earthlings for Dummies - Chapter 1: How Easy it Is to be Human
Hi EthanHoover, Felistia here with a review for you. :D Before I begin let me apologies. It's been awhile since I've reviewed anything and I might be a bit rusty. ...
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: Deleted
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Talon Eye woke up he opened his eyes then got a sharp slice of sunlight though ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 1 The Sand Wyvern Fort
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Some of the time you would be called into a meeting with the chief but that was ...
May 23, 2019 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 2.1
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks At least, Ayda thought it was a human girl. I like the beginning and since I'm ...
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 1
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Even though you’re gone for six months out of the year, a typical second-year student would ...
Aug 29, 2017 -
Re: Tundra
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I'm not quite sure a the beginning. It was great to read, but it ended really ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Guardians of Ga'Hoole: The Watch (A fanfiction)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D (Apologizes if this review isn't good. I'm a little rusty.) Grammar and Punctuation By now, the moon ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: The Dragon's Eye
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Observations Finally solid, the dragon was gently put in front of its creator. This is just an ...
Feb 25, 2017