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Thank you, though, that first bit is contradictory on purpose just like the American health industry!

I'd be honored to be tagged and really curious about what you'll do with this!

Hey @NotReallyHuman , I think this poem is beautiful! Keep writing please!

thank you!

thanks a lot, emotions mean a lot overall in my poetry so im glad it was evocative!

You can only improve through practice and you'll only get better!

Yes it was semi free verse! And the 'another death in bile' line references how overdose/poisoning can make you vomit and have an unpleasant death but it's unfortunately common. Thank ...

yea c:

Transcript: your apologies are vandalism. when did i ask you to write 'i'm sorry' on the wall of my healing? i just erected this monument to my own happiness, and ...

transcript: my day starts with a laundry list of details i soon forget - drink water before caffeine [ your kidneys will thank you ] - or at least the ...

Thank you, and that makes a lot more sense under that lens!

you were right i am the boy it took a few years but you were very correct