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Re: Entry for a (not-so-private) journal
Hey @NotReallyHuman , I think this poem is beautiful! Keep writing please!
Jul 4 - Re: i miss her Jun 1
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Re: taste my silence [the way i tasted your betrayal]
thank you!
May 21 -
Re: left me cold and dead [i wanted you to be better]
thanks a lot, emotions mean a lot overall in my poetry so im glad it was evocative!
Apr 1 -
Re: left me cold and dead [i wanted you to be better]
You can only improve through practice and you'll only get better!
Mar 31 -
Re: left me cold and dead [i wanted you to be better]
Yes it was semi free verse! And the 'another death in bile' line references how overdose/poisoning can make you vomit and have an unpleasant death but it's unfortunately common. Thank ...
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Re: caskets [for safe keeping]
yea c:
Mar 27 -
Re: taste my silence [the way i tasted your betrayal]
Transcript: your apologies are vandalism. when did i ask you to write 'i'm sorry' on the wall of my healing? i just erected this monument to my own happiness, and ...
Mar 27 -
Re: gentle parenting the self
transcript: my day starts with a laundry list of details i soon forget - drink water before caffeine [ your kidneys will thank you ] - or at least the ...
Mar 27 -
Re: Oh No, Apocalypse!
Thank you, and that makes a lot more sense under that lens!
Mar 26 -
Re: Much Ado About Nothing (taking suggestions for a better title.)
you were right i am the boy it took a few years but you were very correct
Mar 19 - Re: it is all starlit Mar 18
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Re: all you provided for me
the he was in fact the narrator! thank you for the review. yes this poem was about traumatic memories surfacing and insistent dehumanization.
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Re: carpet blades and caterpillars
omg thank you so much TvT
May 5, 2025