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[edited by a moderator due to being one of many identical reviews and hence considered spam - enspoilered because there's a reply] This is written very well, and it also ...

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This is written very well, and it also has very great meaning behind it. It was at times a little confusing though, but there is good word choice I myself ...

This poem has been crafted so beautifully. The rhyming and rhythm has been done with perfection. Wow I'm really impressed. It was a fun read. Haven't read anything so fast ...

Amazing flow throughout the chapter. I really like your writing style, it is very unique. You write like a genuine story teller, captivating yet subtle. Loved the line "Cursing under ...

You my friend, have spoken the unspoken, often unnoticed truth of our everyday life. As long as we are alive and breathing, we are doing 'something'. The state of being ...

"From where I stand at the moment, at the end of the summer transfer market I have never been as excited about a forthcoming season that this one." I whole-heartedly ...

This poem is so beautiful. You followed the golden rule of literature, do not tell, show. You've showed me what it's like to be Mia. And the use of the ...

Farah here! I'm here to review your poem. I honestly have no corrections to make. This poem really spoke to me. I mean, it is true, you can not simply ...

This write-up really gives the reader a piece of the writer's mind, or so to say, a glance into the mind of a boy. It is very insightful. And the ...

First off, the rhythm is flawed. There is not much depth in the lyrics. In fact it is pretty plain. The lines have very less connection with each other. And ...

I'd like to start with the repeated stanza: And I'll be safe Guarded by his words I'll be secured Surrounded all over With the scent of his thoughts Lingering around ...

This write-up really gives the reader a piece of the writer's mind, or so to say, a glance into the mind of a boy. It is very insightful. And the ...

I have been moved by your words. One can truly feel the severity of the pain and hopelessness that the writer has portrayed with such simplicity. There was no use ...