fantasydragon01

Hello. Happy Review Day! First off, good job with the story. You did well on the creativity and the originality. I have some nitpicks, however: 1. some volunteers that were ...

Hello. Happy Review Day! First, I really liked your story. It was well-written, not to mention that you handled your words with care. I like how I saw no grammatical ...

Hi! Let me just say that this story was really, really good. I loved it! It was very well-written, and I liked how you handled your words with care. I ...

Hi! I like your story here because of the mystery-feel that it had. I did not spot any errors, maybe except one: When the man asked "What's wrong with your ...

Hi! I really like your story here. I love how it's well-written. I think it's a really good beginning. I myself personally love fantasy and you just nailed it here! ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. I love your story here. I think you are a brave and kind person. I want to say that I am sorry for the loss of ...

I agree with you. This is a beautiful essay. I really like the way you wrote it. The only thing is that when you wrote it, you have added too ...

I agree with Eros here. I, too, just recently joined YWS, and let me say that I do not regret joining it. I really like the help I receive when ...

Hi! I like what you have here. It is well-written and brief. I have found one nitpick, though: 1. "He could see a brilliant jewel in front". I would suggest ...

Hi! I like this song here because it sounds very soft and sweet. I really liked the flow of the song. I like the "truthfulness" part. I think that is ...

Hi, fantasydragon01 here. You may have remembered me for writing a review on "My response to the Pseudo-feminists". And so, I am here to write a review on one of ...

Hi! I agree with you here. I struggle with writing, especially when it comes to describing emotions. I love writing--I think it's my life, but sometimes there is a block ...

I had written a long review on a piece written by willachilles concerning this matter. It explains my opinions. There you will see what I think about feminism and stuff ...

Hi, Eros! I liked your mystery piece here. I liked the way you wrote it. I would have never thought of writing like this. You did an amazing job. *claps ...

I am going to state my opinions here about this matter. Now, I do not mean to offend anyone. Everyone has different opinions. But I am going to state what ...