-
Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me * Chapter 1*
Hi Eros! This is a really good piece of work. It's very descriptive and I could visualize everything. The only thing that I want to point out to you is ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: How to Attract Readers
Yep, preach it, Choco!!! I was attracted by this title and I had not expected this. Great job. Also, the title is not the only thing that attracts readers. The ...
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Behind Moss Eyes (Kingdom Amongst the Moss) Chapter 1 Revision
Hey! I think this story was very interesting, and it certainly captivated me. I like the theme of the story, and I hope you write more. I did find one ...
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: School Life -- Part One
Wow! What a story. I enjoyed it, and it is very, very, very true that "true friends are hard to come by". Preach it!!!! The only thing I want to ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: School Life -- Part Three, Last Part
Hey, hey! I didn't read the other stories, so I will review what I know. I have not spotted any mistakes, and this was a very well-written piece. I liked ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: The Fallen Princess [Part 1]
Hello! This was a very interesting read, and I enjoyed it very much. I myself love fantasy and you did a wonderful job creating this. For some reason, I really ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
Hello, and Happy Review Day!!! What a beautiful piece. I feel as if the cat is talking to me. LOL. I saw no grammatical errors, except for one. You know ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Inside of You
Hello, and Happy Review Day! You've got a nice poem here. The rhyming was good, as well as the writing. Question: is love or hate inside the person? You did ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Walking Among Memories
Hello, and Happy Review Day!! What an interesting story! I liked it very much. It was very well-written, and I think that you handled the character of Ted wonderfully. I ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: An Orthdox Life (One)
Hello, and Happy Review Day!!!!! I found this piece very interesting. I enjoyed it very much. I also liked the fact that it was short, sweet, and to the point. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Rejection Sequence
Hello, Mazuurek. I really, really enjoyed this story. It was well-written, fast-paced, and kept my attention. I liked your choice of words, as well. Please, keep on writing. I should ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: 'Trouble' Parody
I am so touched. You mentioned me. *wipes tear*. I apologize for not getting in touch with you. To me, what made you really noticeable was that essay you wrote ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hello. I really enjoyed this story. It's very original and fairy-tale-ish. I like that. The story was smooth and fast-paced and I did not spot any mistakes. It was very ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Grade 12 Chapter One
Hello. I really like your essay here about high school. It can get hard and irritating at times, but remember to always be strong if trials come in your way. ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Let it Go (Mount Doom Beats)
A Frozen parody? Say, what? Mixed with LOTR? It's a match made in heaven. This was really, really funny. And everything seems to be in place. The lyrics are not ...
Sep 7, 2015
