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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me * Chapter 1*

    Hi Eros! This is a really good piece of work. It's very descriptive and I could visualize everything. The only thing that I want to point out to you is ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: How to Attract Readers

    Yep, preach it, Choco!!! I was attracted by this title and I had not expected this. Great job. Also, the title is not the only thing that attracts readers. The ...

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Behind Moss Eyes (Kingdom Amongst the Moss) Chapter 1 Revision

    Hey! I think this story was very interesting, and it certainly captivated me. I like the theme of the story, and I hope you write more. I did find one ...

    Oct 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: School Life -- Part One

    Wow! What a story. I enjoyed it, and it is very, very, very true that "true friends are hard to come by". Preach it!!!! The only thing I want to ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: School Life -- Part Three, Last Part

    Hey, hey! I didn't read the other stories, so I will review what I know. I have not spotted any mistakes, and this was a very well-written piece. I liked ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Fallen Princess [Part 1]

    Hello! This was a very interesting read, and I enjoyed it very much. I myself love fantasy and you did a wonderful job creating this. For some reason, I really ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)

    Hello, and Happy Review Day!!! What a beautiful piece. I feel as if the cat is talking to me. LOL. I saw no grammatical errors, except for one. You know ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Inside of You

    Hello, and Happy Review Day! You've got a nice poem here. The rhyming was good, as well as the writing. Question: is love or hate inside the person? You did ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Walking Among Memories

    Hello, and Happy Review Day!! What an interesting story! I liked it very much. It was very well-written, and I think that you handled the character of Ted wonderfully. I ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Other Re: An Orthdox Life (One)

    Hello, and Happy Review Day!!!!! I found this piece very interesting. I enjoyed it very much. I also liked the fact that it was short, sweet, and to the point. ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Rejection Sequence

    Hello, Mazuurek. I really, really enjoyed this story. It was well-written, fast-paced, and kept my attention. I liked your choice of words, as well. Please, keep on writing. I should ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: 'Trouble' Parody

    I am so touched. You mentioned me. *wipes tear*. I apologize for not getting in touch with you. To me, what made you really noticeable was that essay you wrote ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Untitled

    Hello. I really enjoyed this story. It's very original and fairy-tale-ish. I like that. The story was smooth and fast-paced and I did not spot any mistakes. It was very ...

    Sep 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Grade 12 Chapter One

    Hello. I really like your essay here about high school. It can get hard and irritating at times, but remember to always be strong if trials come in your way. ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fanfiction Re: Let it Go (Mount Doom Beats)

    A Frozen parody? Say, what? Mixed with LOTR? It's a match made in heaven. This was really, really funny. And everything seems to be in place. The lyrics are not ...

    Sep 7, 2015


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