fairygirl

ohhh, eerie!!!!! cool story, I like it! I'll be reading more! ( THANK YOU. i swear, if he started to sparkle or somdthing, I might've died on the spot. but, ...

Awh, cute! It sounds just like my cousins! Great job! :) "She won't even eat your homemade cookie dough" lol, she's insane! i love cookie dough! (my cooking of the ...

It feels like its moving too fast with less consquences. Everybody has an enemy, unless this land she's in gets along perfectly. The end battle was great but it's a ...

Wow great job. The history is sad! :( Especially since she had done nothing wrong. The story is coming along fantastically. I'll keep reading, definately. Keep at it. Maybe if ...

OMG!!!! LOL!!!!! AMY!!!! WOW!! I can't stop laughing! you go girl!!! I LOVE this story, please, please, please, keep writing! PM me ASAP! Eh, once again, no suggestions. If you're ...

Sheesh, not much to say. I doubt you have any grammatical errors, and even if you do, I will not be pointing them out, thank you very much. I believe ...

Wow, cool story! You've got a great idea here, and I like it alot. THere are just a few little things I want to point out: 1) you kind of ...

Hmm, pretty cool. Soemtimes just looking through other peoples eyes gives you a taste of whats happening to them. Cool, thoughtful poem. I really liked it! :) keep going. I'm ...

Man, this makes me miss summer so much. It's very sweet and I needed it! Where I'm at theres either snow or gray clouds or both. We got a blue ...

Awh, SAD!!! you did a very good job and I really like it. It's very discriptive, even though slightly depressing. No one wants an empty Christmas. I'm like that with ...

ooohh!! Now this is cool! I like it alot!!! Only a couple of flys in my ointment: 1) details, please! What does Geoffery look like? Hair color, eye color, height, ...

Whoa. This is pretty cool--in a deep dark depressing way. You've got an awesome talent here, really! I could never manage to write anything as discriptive as this. You protrayed ...

Hmmm, Sounds interesting. There are just little things that could be fixed but I'm TERRIBLE at grammer. We're writers. That's what spell check is for, right? Ok, so I LOVE ...

Oh my gosh. WOW. I want to read it again and again and again!! This was FANTASTIC!! I mean, I've read short stories and hundreds of books but this REALLY ...

Wow great job!! This was a fun read! I dn't have anything to really crituiqe sinc eyou did such a good job!! Keep it up, I'm excited to see what ...