eviehoward

I love this poem. It's beautiful and you should be proud. Like the message of the poem, this is a free-verse that is unique. It runs smoothly (well there are ...

Hi again! I found your other poem :P It puzzles me as to why no one else has commented on it! Your poems are so good. Anyways, again I see ...

You have a lovely grasp of portraying emotion. Faking perfection is so common nowadays, especially with teenage depression increasing. I, personally, fake smile a lot so this short story really ...

I LOVE IT! As a fan of Sonnets, and Ye Olde English ( I love that saying) I have to admit your poem made me happy even though the content ...

Hi there :D I really love your way of writing poems, your structure is quite haphazard yet seems to flow very well. Your grammar and spelling is perfect, Kudos for ...

Hi there! I hope this loneliness is just in the writing and not in you. If it is form your own experience then know that you really aren't alone, we ...

I really like the tone of this poem, however I have a few criticisms about the style/structure. I think that this poem would look and flow a lot better if ...

HI there! I have come to review your piece of writing. :D First off, I love magic books :D And I can see you really tried with this first chapter. ...

Hi there, here's the review you asked for :) First off I love the idea of Time having a Doomsday book. It's kind of like Death and his hourglasses. You ...

So far I really like you book :D. A 6 year-olds point of view is always interesting. The mother is a *cough*female dog*cough*, but of course you wrote her like ...

Hi there :) First off I love the idea of this :D I'm not exactly a fan of the Bible, but the idea of this is very good :) However, ...

OMG I love Venice! I went there when I was younger, only thing I remember from my childhood haha. So onto your poem: well it's definitely free-verse which is a ...

I really love the style of this poem. The conversational tone really emphasises the struggle between the two voices. One is desperate and the other is like a friend, a ...

So unfortunately I cannot say much good about this prologue at this time. Your punctuation and style is not good, to put it simply. You haven't put in any capitals, ...

I personally thought that your rhyming was fine :) Your poem flowed quite well because it feels like it's meant to express loneliness, which every 3rd line REALLY emphasises with ...