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Heyy lovelydove, thanks for the review! As for the timing, where i live, at 4p.m it starts to get dark and the skies get kinda dull and gloomy. When one ...

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This!! I just love it when literature evokes that sense of fellow feeling. I'm sorry about your anxiety, but I have no doubt You've come out of it a much ...

Thanks for your review! The second-last paragraph was about the person rediscovering hope, and the crossed out lines are a paradoxical parallel to the initial past version of the person ...

Thanks for this sweet review, I loved the lion and gazelle analogy. Welcome to YWS

Okay camilla cabello real asf tho

i love it you can js see int he last part the spark that ties it all together

Ahh, thanks a lot! You captures most of it really well, and the ambiguity of reciprocation IS what I set out to convey. When you're in love, all you can ...

Aww, this is a very wholesome review! I kinda wanted to connect 'point' in time, to the speck of colour or a speck on the horizon. The work also starts ...

Heyy! So 'sibylline' comes from Sibyl, which is a word for ancient prophetesses ( from Greece or Rome ). Sibylline Ideations stands for prophetic thoughts and ponders. The narrator as ...

Thanks a lott! Yeah, continuity can be really hard to involve in a poem that randomly branches off to different streams of time. The woman in the sunset is actually ...

Yeahh, definitely have to work on my rhyming. Glad you understand the 'counting sheep' thing, its just a coping mechanism to bring one back from the edge. Thanks a lot ...

This poem is about a sleepless night, when the world feels so quiet that you have to turn inwards to hear something. And what you hear (doubts, fears) often spur ...