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Re: Death and fame
Hi there! I completely agree with BlueGlow - this is a really unique concept for a poem. It very well illustrates the emotion that goes into the hunger for fame ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: blushing with a shameful glow
Hi Charlie! Hope you're having a fantastic day or night, I'm here for a review! This is so adorable - it made me genuinely smile to read. I can tell ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: i refuse to outlive you
Hi there! This is such a beautiful poem, though very simple. As someone who struggles ab it with written poetry, I really appreciate the simplicity of poems like this, that ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: Earth and Gag Halfrunt
Hello! First of all, I love Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, so I just had to respond to this. I can totally see the inspiration from Douglas Adams, though I ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: A Comparison of Education Between the Multiverses
This is so creative! I love this genre - essay, but almost satire while still being creative. The fact that you manage to make it feel more leaning into the ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: Wildflowers
This is so beautiful! I love the extended metaphor and representation of the world "wildflower", and I think it's so beautiful. Like spearmint said, the dialogue also flows really well ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: Dust-mote Impressions (or the Futility of Big Stories)
Hi! I adore the structure of this poem! I've seen very few artistic poems on this site, and this one is really fantastic and creative. I am a big fan ...
Dec 15, 2020 -
Re: Not That Funny
Hi there! First of all, you should be so proud of yourself! Writing a poem with a rhyme scheme is no easy feat without making it sound forced, and I'd ...
Dec 15, 2020 -
Re: For Glory
Hi! I will preface by saying that I LOVE poems about real-life things. As much as poems about one's internal emotions are fantastic, it's fun to know what the writer ...
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: baked goods in the mirror
Wow, this imagery is fantastic. This feeling is captured so well - the feeling of just feeling so disgusting that you want to hide from your own reflection. I really ...
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: Winter train
This makes me really happy to read! The imagery is so pleasant and cozy. It reminds me of the Polar Express a little, or like this one Chanel ad about ...
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: Co-rumination
I love this idea! I agree with Editorandperks, this reads like a definition poem. I think that this could use more words and description. What you have here is really ...
Dec 3, 2020
