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Thx!

You know all those hand-blown glass things? Well that's what I mean and you know how glass is transparent? I mean crystal clear transparent.

I will, don't worry! :D

Yes, it is. Love your avvie!

Nothing but some grammatical errors which I'm sure are fine. However, the ending was a bit chopped and you need some more punctuation than just commas and periods. Overall very ...

I know. But although printham wasn't trying, I feel the need to stand up for this author because "I hope you write a work better than this one" is a ...

I know, Ashkitten. But you don't have to say that you see a poem with no rhythm at all, and that's also kinda o mocking. And yes, you shouldn't say ...

Now you can say your welcome for the hurt you've caused. To be honest, writers don't say that they don't like works. They figure how to make them better. If ...

Your first line, @Urba? Just rude. I wrote a poem something like this before. No one said it didn't have rhythm, and you shouldn't too. If this did anything, it ...

This deserves so many likes the Joker can't even laugh. :D

Yeah, but I just want to paint a different picture of Kronos, like an actual dad.

Thank you! Quite proud of this poem, actually.

Thanks, Rain! I did work really hard on the description, but once you pointed some other things out, I'll try to fix them later. But girl (or boy), you have ...

Yeah. So this poem is about a girl who once thought she liked this rich, show-off guy who was full of money, but broke up as soon as she saw ...

Yeah I definitely will.