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Oh my gosh, this is probably one of the best stories I have ever seen on this site. If I am not already following you, allow me to do so. ...

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I love this poem, it really describes your relationship with the ocean. I really like this part, because it is so...I don't know, but I love it! is when I'm ...

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I think the paragraphs you were telling me about Annie and her sister? You rushed. Look: When I was ten my mom left, just up and went, packed a single ...

Okay, I probably shouldn't have read this. I'm eight, y'all. But hey, there's description was nice. Wait. Are Christian and Jules gay? They boys? I'm still a little confused 'bout ...

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Short! Impressive, though. I do feel a little like a fan of 1D, but not too much. My friends will hate me for that. I do like 3 of their ...

Awwwww, love the ending! It's so hopeful and alive. A few things... I watched his face falter. They were the words he had been praying to hear every day, yet ...

Well, this is easily one of the best poems I have ever read! I dunno if there is any better! I love the repetition used here: Those adoring poets of ...

Wow! Love it! It's a questioning song\poem but also with a bit of humor, especially on this part: All the family members have things to pass the time, For Prince ...

This...this...I mean, this is amazing. I love all the description, I was confused when I started reading this, but as I got further in I wasn't anymore. Here's a few ...

Wait, I'm a little confused by your poem. Hey, I'm only eight. Okay, to be honest, this person does not sound like a typical Mermaid. It says right here: But ...

Love this thing! I think you really described how love feels and your crush. I appreciate the rhyme. As I said, maybe we could start a fanclub. Anyway, this part: ...

Haha, love this part:"Okay, em, can you get me two dozen spiders and some micro signal dampeners?" Chip asked Treego eventually, "Tell them their Captain has ordered them to report ...

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OK, some critique. Look at these examples: And you too, have made your name famous, as famous timebender, and reviver of the Timebenders. I must say, I thank you for ...

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I think this is the best thing I've heard in the old Green Room! The only Chapter 1! The only one that didn't need explaining! I am seriously going to ...

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This story is amazing! I really love the descriptive paragraphs in this chapter! Praise: I'm glad you separated the dialogue. That is what all writers should do, though I didn't ...