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FiguringOutLife, hiya! Whatcha' doing, and why are you doing it? Just kidding, no personal info allowed. In the first short section, I think you don't need the hyphen. Unnecessary. "What ...

Hallo, Stori, haven't seen you around! This poem was quite...strange. I have never seen anything like it. Never. I love it though. It was classified greatly, your point clear, and ...

Hello, Booie, haven't seen you around. Haven't been around much, have you? The title. It describes the setting very well, and creates a environment of peace (which is probably what ...

Hullo, RoyalHighness! Nice to see ya' again! I think you have way too much "head". Three times already. A bit much, don't you think? "Violins are now all that fill ...

Hello, Flite! I'll re-follow you as soon as I can! In the description, I see you said "they went into the lake. They went into the woods." I found that ...

Heya, Nightcrawler! Good to see a familiar elf! I think Fin is a perfectly normal person. And that is why I don't see how Ashley says he saved himself from ...

XeNITe, hello, welcome to Young Writers Society, and thanks for following me! As soon as my number of followers and following are equal, I will follow you. Thalia...muse...unrivaled grace...why did ...

Linkzude16, I know I've seen your avatar somewhere. Nice, I think there's a movie about Link and the king and Zelda and Ganon and all that. The first thing I ...

Lil2020, hello! I actually feel the same way about introducing myself, I'm technically shy when around people I don't know or haven't seen in a long time. "No where" is ...

Dragongirl, hi! Why did you capitalize principal? And besides, you spelled it wrong. "The last thing I wanted was to have the Principle mixed up in this mess." And how ...

WittyUsernameHere, hello! Thx for the follow! I think... I realized, from many days of experience, that you don't need the parenthesis. Express it, don't be afraid to out in lady-like ...

Hey, my old friend! "Leukemia" doesn't need to be capitalized. It doesn't. Anybody else? No. Not one person should capitalize a sickness because it doesn't deserve it. And this place ...

Hi, unknown391625! I see that Invisible has a lot of "I"s. I'm not sure about that, but I think it is unnecessary. And why is this so short? You could ...

Emma, nice to meet ya', name's wisegirl22, "welcome"! Some nitpicks. Okay, so "away" is overused. Sure, it's okay, but really. SAY SOMETHING ELSE. "That you are going away, Now I ...

Good evening, and nice work you have here! I'm the title, it was supposed to be "Her Eyes", but instead you put it as "Hey Eyes". Typo, maybe? And from ...