Published February 13, 2005
Song – Hope
Someone is telling me,
That you are going away,
Now I know that this chance,
Has gone away,
I will never know that…
I will never know.
Oooh, I’ll never,
I’ll never know,
What you will feel…
Chorus
Its sunny light,
Its bright day,
This hope inside,
Has gone away.
You never say,
That what you feel,
This hope inside me,
Has gone away,
I hoped for the best,
Though it never came,
Ooh no.
This chance is gone,
Gone away.
Chorus
Its sunny light,
Its bright day,
This hope inside,
Has gone away.
You never say,
That what you feel,
This hope inside me,
Has gone away,
Please come back me,
Please stay,
I need to talk to you,
I want you to stay,
I have this words,
I wanted to say,
I hope believe me,
I will always,
Chorus
Its sunny light,
Its bright day,
This hope inside,
Has gone away.
You never say,
That what you feel,
This hope inside,
Has gone away,
I have this words,
I wanted to say,
I hope believe me,
I’ll love you always,
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Emma, nice to meet ya', name's wisegirl22, "welcome"!
Some nitpicks. Okay, so "away" is overused. Sure, it's okay, but really. SAY SOMETHING ELSE.
"That you are going away,
Now I know that this chance,
Has gone away..."
And why was there THREE choruses at the end? Why? Please...tell me...*sobs*. It just isn't normal, my friend. Just isn't normal.
Forever,
Wisegirl22
It didn't really blow my mind, but it was okay. Not really personal though.
Very nicely done what does the beat sound like.