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Hello, samanthas0107! A very late welcome to Young Writers Society! So I'm guessing a fanfiction about One Direction? I'm sorry if I guessed wrong, I don't really look into One ...

Hello, TiwnSeed! Here to review your poem! WOW. I honestly am amazed. I have said this to another talented writer, but this is a perfect poem. That is very, very ...

Hello, ongoeslife! My name is wisegirl22, and I am here to get your poem out of the Green Room! There's really nothing to comment on. The stanzas were beautiful, your ...

Hello, RagingLive! A late welcome to Young Writers Society for you! :D I think this series of couplets was very thoughtful with the rhyme and choice of words. I appreciate ...

Hello, pendr! I don't read Doctor Who, but it was interesting to hear about him. Nice rhyme scheme you've got there, don't have any problems with that. Wait, one thing. ...

Hey Gravity! Nice to see ya! This piece is a bit mushy for me, no offense, but a nine year old can't take this stuff unless she really pushes herself ...

Hello, KindlingDragonsFire. I am wisegirl22 here to tear apart your piece! Not literally, but woohoo! Happy Review Day! I liked the beginning. These characters have interesting names. But, I think ...

Thegreyreality, hello! I hope you are having a wonderful time here on this amazing site! Congratulations on publishing your short story! (Although it is kind of long...:D) There are some ...

Levity, hello! You're pretty new here, so welcome to Young Writers Society! My first nitpick: repetition. It's great that you're trying to use description, but you used green too much. ...

Hello, Brigitha! Nice to meet you! A few things about this poem. I noticed from the beginning you have text talk. I think you can change all those "ur"s and ...

Hello, rissymay! Nice to see you up and about, welcome to Young Writers Society! I have first some nitpicks to deliver, and then we'll get into the huge packages. In ...

PCA123, hello! I'm glad to help you get this out of the Green Room! Here is the first thing I noticed. Just a little nitpick, but I think it would ...

Hey, TurquoiseLion, whassup? Art? Well, I'll review it. I'm not too picky about what I am reviewing. Firstly, I like how cute your character was. I am sure other people ...

RAVENMOONSTONE DON'T DARE SAY THIS IS TRUE! I can't believe it if you do. I had a friend like that, though, so I understand. Tell me, Raven, what would you ...

jazzydracula! Hello, nice day to you! I am here to review, so let's get on with it! First, in the beginning paragraph, you have this sentence. This is all very ...