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Hey, Arkhaion! Wise here. Wow. I really loved this. The rhymes sounded beautiful and unforced, the words all made sense and the meaning was easy to understand. This song was ...

Hey, IceWinifredd! Wise dropping in for a review. Songs aren't usually published, and it's nice to see one! My first suggestion is that you put the names of the sections ...

Hey, Tuesday! It's wise here to review! Happy Gift Day. :3 First of all, a typo. Shouldn't it be "lightly"? "Where snow falls lighty on kids noses..." I honestly don't ...

Hey, Emery! Nice piece you have there. :D The first thing I thought when I looked at this work was: this needs some verses. Cramming them all together isn't the ...

Hey, Eros! This title really drew me in. I think it's a pretty good hook. Although the capitalization is a little bit weird...>.> First of all, this section bugged me ...

Hey, Strange! You have a specialty in humor... The only thing I'm going to comment on is your lack of an apostrophe in the second line. You should probably put ...

Hey, boundless! This piece quite contradicts your avatar. :D First thing I noticed was that you seem to make your sentences short when it comes to stating the probability. I ...

Hey, it's wise! I'm obviously here to review. The first line is kind of unclear to me. "Class six" is the thing that trips me up the most. What's a ...

Hey, Augustus! Wise here, just some things I noticed. You should probably write out the number three because it makes your work seem more professional and polished. Do this for ...

Hey, CzMunoz001! Nice to meet you, I'm wisegirl22, and I'm here to review your work! In most books and pieces, authors write out their numbers and words. "6" should be ...

This is terrifying. I'm not trying to criticize or anything but seriously. Why would someone waste 350 coins for this? Why? People intend to review pieces that need reviewing and ...

I love it, RebelWriter. However, there are some nitpicks. One, there are unnecessary capitalizations that you can fix if you look over it carefully. ... Well, turns out that's the ...

Hey, ishitadutt! Nice work you've got here...can I review it? :D First off, you talk about how this guy is taking his test. He finishes ahead of everyone else and ...

Hey Birkhoff! Wisegirl22 here to review. I see you have some high opinions of your cat. Okay, I'm not really good with religious stuff, but I'm pretty sure "god" should ...

Hey, TheSilentBagpipe! Wise here to review. Wow, I don't really have much to say. This was a really good poem, and I have nothing to change about this. I can't ...