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Hello, writer12345! It's Artemis28 here for a review. You seem to be very popular. :) In the first paragraph, there were a lot of nitpicks I caught. "I mean you ...

Heya, Lightsong! You need a review? Well, if you don't, I'm here for one. I suppose you can't argue. :D The first nitpick I saw was this. You've already said ...

Heya, Rishik! Artemis28 here with a review for YOU! :) Let's get started. This here, you might need to replace the comma with something else. A semicolon might work, because ...

Hey, Lightsong! Artemis28 here, and I wanna drop in with a review! :D Okay. The first stanza was okay, but there were some errors. Did you mean "hundred-page?" The "hundred-pages" ...

Heya! It's Artemis28 here, and I want to review! Happy Review Day! :) So, first, I wanna say how much I like the idea of this. Seven watches, and they ...

Hello, Niamh12! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I'm Artemis, and I'm here to review your work. :) These passages are very interesting. You do well with your description, and the ...

Heya, Comrie! I'm Artemis28, and I'm here to review! :) I didn't spot a nitpick until near the middle, so that was pretty good. Nice job. Here, you made a ...

Hello, felistia! It's Artemis28, here to repay you back for all your reviews on my poems! :) Okay, I have to admit, I was confused. I didn't know what this ...

Hello, RedHood! I'm Artemis28, and I'm here for a review. I like your username, by the way. ^.^ Okay, so first off, the mood is really obvious. Helplessness, or something, ...

Hello, it's Artemis28! I'm here for a review, obviously. :) I like the idea of this poem. Good imagery, talking about the glowing lights and the trees. Nice job on ...

Hey, TimmyJake! It's Artemis28, here for a review on your poem! Ah, so it's rhyming. I don't see much of that on here anymore. Most of the ones I read ...

Hello, Stegosaurus! It's me, Artemis28, here for a review! :D Okay. So, I like how you begin with description, about how the main character's brother and him were looking under ...

Artemis28 here, once again! I told you I would be back in a few seconds. :D Wolfie36, your first chapter pulled me in, so now I'm onto your next! Ooh, ...

Hello, Wolfie36! It's Artemis28 here to review your chapter! :) Let's begin. The first nitpick I have was right here. It has to do with word choice: is "wiped" a ...

Hello, Noelle! It's Artemis28 here, and I want to review your short story! So I like the whole idea behind this. You never REALLY tell the reader what happened to ...