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My hearts aches to see you walk away Then my tears fill me eyes When I know that you want to walk away Hello! This stanza can be eliminated. if ...

I really, really love the idea. I feel like its a night in december as I read this. Beautiful. However... Ysabel: Do not worry, my world is that of flower ...

I love the idea; some parts were a little repetitive. Deep inside a wishing well; A light shining the traveler's way. Even though never seen. Nor never touched. It was ...

A new year has begun another new day another rising sun Many new thoughts many new hopes this coming year has brought Coming to Finding new conclusions after this past ...

I am a total newbie at poetry, but I really, really loved this piece. haggling for their daily bread and selling their souls for anything that glitters. I am enchanted ...

Hello Kat Train? Remember me, the obnoxious person who critiqued your critique :roll: Yeah, I get a little carried away sometimes. Anyways, Hands, cracked and caked with life, love, and ...

I think you did a fantastic job. It has beautiful imagery with meaning, great rhythm and rhymes that don't feel like they struggled or deterred from the subject matter or ...

I just read your last poem and I get the same feeling with that one as this: I feel like your telling me, not showing. Your narrating through words, but ...

Ignore the person above me, she is a noob, to be quite honest, and doesn't know how we do things here on yws. Our aim, to remind everyone, is too ...

First thing on my mind: I love your signature. I think I may steal it, when I get sick of mine. NITPICKS Adrian watched from his mind. He watched the ...

I clicked on this story thinking, "Ok. Another twilight romance in poor disguise-- it's fine. I can take it." But wow-- a deaf homosexual. I love, love, love it. :mrgreen: ...

I didn't want to be the first person to comment on this, but seeing as a I love Nelson Mandela I couldn't help myself. Unfortunately, I know very little about ...

Anything other that Fahrenheit by Ray Bradbury. He writes what I consider the best science-fiction short stories... ever. Medicine for Melancholy Golden Apples of the Sun I sing the body ...

Speak by the same person who wrote twisted (author named somewhere above.) I hated Twisted, it seemed so cliche and shallow, the main character was ridiculously depressed for little reason ...

Thanks for the review. I went out to buy this book but Barnes and Noble, at least the one near me, has a black abyss for its science fiction and ...