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I loved it... but the last stanza didn't seem to be as awesome as the rest of it. And, for the sake of specific compliments... because you know I love ...

Ahhh... so many different metaphors... But they're so nice...

I have a feeling it's one of those poems you take from something that happened and you drape it with fancy words... but you still leave enough so we sort ...

This was a bit dull... but the flip was pretty creative, especially with the line in between [which I didn't even get until the second time I read it... heh].

Wow... amazing phrases... I can't really see past it, but I like it.

I liked it... From my view of it, it's something that I think about a lot. Not sure if it's what you intended to put into it. So... yes... if ...

he awakes Shouldn't it be he awakens? All I can say is... lots of metaphors... that I didn't really connect the dots with...

I think I sort of got some parts of it... Anyway, it was very haunting at those parts I think I got. I guess that's something that you wanted to ...

I agree with everyone above... very well done.

Done wonderfully once again... especially the end. I was a mere foolish rag doll cast aside, they uttered no words. Who are 'they'? I was a little confused at this ...

With the style this is written in, I think this was done just fine. I feel the gentle moment Of her heart beating The 'gentle moment' line was a bit ...

Eh... It was kind of sappy... I know, I shouldn't be one to talk about sappiness... Lovely, I guess I can say, yet it made me laugh throughout... but it's ...

It was elegant and, overall, was nice. I agree with Writersdomain about the second line, though I thought the rest was fine.

Oh my... dramatic indeed... Classic literature right here... :D

It seemed sort of repetitive at times, though they weren't really repeating anything at all... There's something about this that I didn't really liked, yet I liked it at the ...