You are so very fragile that I feel forced
to suffocate you in bubblewrap and enclose you
in a cardboard box (this side up) and send
you (my poetry) through UPS, addressed to me.
tsk tsk tsk 
naughty little you
poor mail man
nice work you sack of brad
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hm...who is this Nick...
*goes to brads blog*
Eh... It was kind of sappy... I know, I shouldn't be one to talk about sappiness... Lovely, I guess I can say, yet it made me laugh throughout... but it's not bad or short.
The last stanza made me laugh...marshmallow...hehe. Maybe something like 'wax'? I'm not sure. The marshmallow makes it sound très stupid.
Yes, I am.
not too short, not too sympathetic and not bad.
And I saw his pic.
happy now?
Is this too short, too sympathetic, or just bad all around? I can't decide.
Nick's picture is on my blog.