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Hey-o! This poem has a lulling quality about it which I think fits in nicely with its theme of stories and fairy tales. It works together to make a lullaby ...

Hey-o! I really like the direction this is going. You have good flow and I felt lead through the poem by the length and syllabic proportion of the stanzas. I ...

Hi there! It's been a bit since I did a review, so feel free to ask clarifying questions. First off, I liked this. It was a relaxing read and quite ...

Hey there, I'm Emoti. I really like the length of this poem. Short, sweet and to the point is one of my favorite things in poems, which is highly underestimated. ...

Hey baby, First, for like the 29384729347298479256th time today: Happy birthday and I love you. Next: I like this, it's dark and just...very you. Knowing what you listen to I ...

This really caught my eye. It's both brave and relatable, I think you not only captured your own thoughts and feelings about the painting and life, but also made a ...

So, since you're new I'll explain my reviewing style real quick: When I review I start with nitpicks. Which will be numbered and the original line will be quoted. Then ...

Hello! I am Emoti. In this review I will work in order starting with specific things within the poem then moving to things like flow and overall feelings. 1. The ...

Hello! I am Emoti. In this review I will work in order starting with specific things within the poem then moving to things like flow and overall feelings. 1. The ...

Hello! I am Emoti. Usually I do reviews systematically, but this demands special attention. Firstly, kids, don't do drugs. Next, I have to agree with Guineapiggirl in that you really ...

Hello! I am Emoti. I try to review systematically so I'll start with an Overall, then move to things within the poem, then to things like flow and organization. Overall: ...

Hello! I am Emoti and I'd like to start by saying this is lovely. I'll try to work systematically, starting with nit-picks from the poem then moving to things like ...

Hello and welcome! I like to get right to it when I review so here goes: 1. "Hoodies were never a good sign at night. Criminals wore hoodies while trying ...

Hey babe, Heres the scoop. I like. you're pretty consistant. I could see this being a good song. Only one thing to look at. You're rhyming (kind of) Here: Maybe ...

Hello! Overall i like this. its well thought out though a bit confusing at times. It seems that any gramatical errors have been sorted out by other reviewers. Generally, though, ...