emmylou1995

Hi Dingobabee. I liked the idea that your story is based on. A lot of it was written choppily, but I really liked both the concept and your main character. ...

Hey Audy. I really liked this. It was really descriptive, and there's a very interesting story happening. You begin very well. Your opening paragraph is wonderful, with just enough mystery ...

Hey littleauthor. I really liked this. It struck really deep for me, because I've struggled with the big S for a while. If you don't mind, that's what I'm going ...

Hey Noelle! I really liked this story. I thought it was cute and well executed and it has a very interesting theme to it. I loved the way the mirror ...

Hi, Carina. Okay, this is one depressing story. I liked it, but I have a few pieces of advice for mentioned before, the use of repetition got a little tiring. ...

I really loved the wording in this poem. I thought the way you addressed the concept was extremely interesting. The punctuation definitely took away from the poem, so maybe take ...

Dear Yatta! Okay, first of all, I hope you are not going through depression yourself. Personally, it is something I've had to struggle with for the past few years, and ...

This was horrible and gruesome. Personally, a little too much. I think that it would be best if you added more to this. A girl (or guy) just died. Thats ...

This was a very interesting poem. I liked it. For one, I think you could go into more detail about what is going on. Who is the man, who is ...

Okay, Emmy here to review. First of all, I loved the idea of the poem. It was kind of cliche but I liked the phrases you used. I think that ...

I have, sadly, had experiance in this area of expertise. And I must say that you captured the feelings and mood perfectly. I cried at the depressed part because thats ...

I absolutley loved this! At first, I was kind of confused at what it was about, but then when I read the name of the song, I understood. So, yeah, ...

Okay, I like the idea of the poem. I really do. As others have said above me, it is a good idea but not very original. Its also very not ...

I really liked this poem. It was very clear and true in this modren age. Everyone lives for others, well, not everyone but you get my point. I think some ...

I really really liked this and the ideas in it. But, other than the storyline, nothing else is very intimate. We don't really know what the character feels and it ...