emmaline49

I saw the wind stir up the clear surface, (nice first line) Expanding ripples flashing in the sun ( good revision there) It sent dry leaves to skate ahead with ...

This is a gorgeous poem, I just love the imagery you use, it's so colorful and descriptive. "But the environment is suffering. Things are not what they used to be: ...

The crinkling of your face, (love the first line) skin splintering beneath the crashing ceiling before our voices capsize, (I like the idea of voices capsizing) and rise, the tide ...

Hey you. :) This is amazing. It's so raw and painfully visual. I really admire you for being able to write something so honest and, well, vulnerable. Great job! (And ...

It's raining again. Why do I feel so sad when it rains? Fat droplets slide down my face I like this line. Leaving tiny tracks of water Like a line ...

How can I tell you Just all that you are? Words dance at the tip of my tongue, And yet, other words seem so far. What words then can be ...

Hard times come and hard times go, even when we don’t let it show. Our faith in each other, friends and family alike, often fades, put out like a light. ...

Words tumble out placing wounds where they hurt the most; Welcome to Hell, it seems I shall be your host I like that. :D Beware of the all demons Do ...

Red, black, pink, white, yellow… All the colors of the rainbow I can see. Reaching out I cusp one, two in each hand. So soft, so smooth. I smell their ...

Who know you'd break my heart You did your part Now I've got to pick up the pieces I need your kisses I miss the way it use to be ...

Poem For The Girl There’s chocolate and hugs and love all about, It’s that time of year when we get rid of doubt. We forget all our troubles and think ...

Poppies grow among the mossy stones, about and around them; Some rest their heads on these stones as on a pillow for weariness; And the rest toss and reel and ...

Hate me, hate me, hate me, I would have maybe taken out the third "hate me" Is that all you can do? You don’t even know me--- But I've seen ...

Oh dear, it's you -- you're looking marvelous today your hair is knotted because you forgot to comb it, and your clothes aren't clean -- you wore them out on ...

I think this is interesting. Your words are actually sort of original for this type of poem. There are a lot of poems like this, but it's still original, and ...