emjayc

Hi there! This is a really interesting story :) I love the whole concept! I wish you would provide a little more background on Lilith and why she cursed all ...

Hey, I'm back again to give my review as promised! So here we go. I'll read it through and point out grammatical errors and comment: ~"Soon the warm blackness I ...

I agree one hundred percent with therealme. This is a great poem and you convey the emotion behind it quite well. It was moving to read and the rhythm flowed ...

This is so amazing!!! You are such a great writer and I love the whole plot and how well you have developed your characters! :D I read through this entire ...

Hello, emjay here to review your amazing story :) This looks very interesting, especially due to the specific setting. I'll make comments as I go along: ~"Everybody dressed in the ...

I like the theme of this poem a lot! It's very creative :) I'll review as I read: In the first stanza it should say "that WERE holding him down". ...

That is so sad :( It's touching that you wrote this and I hope her family doesn't leave her alone like that. Dementia is such a terrible thing to deal ...

Hello I'm emjay and I'll be reviewing you today ^^ I am really interested to see how this story is! Okay so my question about the first line is why ...

Hello, I'm sincerely sorry to hear about what happened to this woman. Your poem was excellent and even without the explanation at the end I followed the theme because it ...

I read this aloud and it's a really good poem! :) I like the theme a lot! There is one line I would personally alter: "wielding my shadowiness like a ...

You're 14? This is extremely well written! :D It actually reminds me of my writing when I was your age (not trying to sound like an egomaniac, it just really ...

Hello, I'm emjayc and I think that this is a beautiful poem. I truly love the imagery and, although I know little about poetry and could only hope to write ...

I adore this poem :') Probably because I like the idea of entering other cultures and I believe the final stanza is amazing! I really have nothing to criticize because ...

Beautiful poem! I love how you repeat the question "But what is it really?" I also really like your diction and how you give the clock human characteristics. The clock ...

Hello, I am thrilled to review this story :) It's a creative idea to write a narrative from Noah's point of view. I enjoyed the story, although it was very ...