emilyleigh

This is a cute poem! I hate being the critical one, but here's what I think could be improved about it... It's sweet and cute, but the emotion falls flat ...

Awwh. As a Daddy's girl I totally enjoyed this poem. Very touching and sweet. I liked LookUpThere's suggestion of possibly closing with "You're still my superhero." Not something that has ...

Hi there! I likes this story and the description is great, however, I feel the pacing was a bit slow...maybe it felt that way because the story didn't have much ...

I really like the whole concept of this. I think it flows well, except when it comes to: "Hesitant tattletales telling sadly of the spells set deep as coins plunked ...

I like the concept of the story..I've always loved "What if's" in love stories. However, when I read this, the emotion falls a bit flat. I think, if there were ...

I enjoyed the essence of this poem.. however, personally, I think that the questions in this poem make it a bit cliche at times..especially, "Was it so wrong in asking ...

I think this poem was very interesting, intriguing. I liked the ease of the rhyming and the mystery of whatever it is you seek drew me in. I really love ...

Hey, I really like your poem :) There are just a few sugestions I have for you that I think would make it better. You are a woman who has ...

That's pretty good for the first poem you wrote, but there are two main issues I have with it. One, is puncutation. Not every line is a sentence, and punctuation ...

I actually really like this, it was really descriptive. There were a few grammatical errors. “It didn’t matter now,” he thought to himself while grabbing at a leafless branch for ...

It's pretty good but there are some parts I feel are a little cliche. To fix that, show and don't tell. Like, when you say, "You hurt yourself physically and ...

I liked your poem, it's usually harder to write a happy poem, at least in my opinion, and this one was pretty good. I just have one suggestion, and that ...

I like short poems that have simple words, because i feel that they really do hold so much more pwer and emotion. However, you do need to have punctuation in ...

Wow that was really good! Lots of poems lose me attention quickly but I really wanted to read all of this one. The only thing I found that I would ...