emilybrodo

Hey, Em here, I’m going to review this for you. ‘His figure didn't seem threateningly strong nor easily defeatable.’ You have a comma here instead of a full stop. ‘ ...

Hey, just a quick review: Spelling and Grammar: ‘The wind howls, scattering leaves in it's wake, it is the middle of Winter and lightning and thunder are at war.’ ‘it’s’ ...

Hey! Em here with the review I promised. Spelling and Grammar: “Thundered boomed and lightning flashed in the dark perilous clouds,” ‘Thundered’ should be ‘thunder’, because that makes mor

Hey Alex, Em here with the review as requested. Spelling and Grammar: ‘As I look out thehe window I catch glance of a sign’ I’m pretty sure you meant to ...

Hello, Em here with the review as requested! Your sentence, ‘she might had the key,’ doesn’t make overly much sense, I recommend revising it to something like, ‘she might have ...

Hey, Em here with the review XD First off, spelling and grammar: ‘All this thoughts swarmed my mind when I felt pain,’ should be, ‘All these thoughts swarmed my mind ...

Hey Yubbies, Em here with the review. First of all, I didn’t find anything wrong with your grammar or spelling, well done on that. When I read this poem, I ...

Hello, Em here with the review as requested. Spelling and grammar: ‘“Y-you're the one. The one who's been murdering them.” her voice was soft….’ Should be, ‘“Y-you're the one. The ...

Hello, Em here with the review as requested. I apologize that it took me a while to review, I’ve had a little trouble getting motivated to do anything lately. Anyway, ...

Em here, This starts out not very well, but ends in a sort of shocking way. I don't really like the second sentence, 'he hurtled a bush.' To me it ...

Hello, Em here with the review. Grammar and spelling: ‘Ah, yes. Them.’ Should more likely be, ‘Ah yes, them,’ of course if you had it that way on purpose and ...

Hello, Em here as requested! XD If you have any questions regarding the or other things just PM me or reply to this comment, and thank you so much for ...

This story has amazing potential, and so far it's going great! I just think you need to add a little more description for this piece is very rushed, I'm not ...

My first thoughts were that this was me, and it is. We tend to procrastinate with our worries and concerns buzzing around our heads. Yet we have to remember that ...

Wow! 'Jaw drops' I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Please sign my shirt. Due to the fact that I'm suffering from a massive writer's block this is the best review I can give, ...