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Re: Josefina’s birth
Hi! Here to leave a short review. One of the most concise short stories I've ever read. But the character layering, emotional intimacy and the consistent wistful tone are haunting ...
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Re: Elisa’s origin: Souls and Roses 🧚🏽♀️🌸
Hi there, here to leave a review. Beautiful short story! I love the imagery and atmosphere; the contrast between the idyllic Rosesilk town and the brutality of the massacre. Concise ...
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Re: Transformers:Heavy Metal UPDATED
Hi! I'm here to give a review; this was an interesting piece of work. So, I'll start with things that I liked, followed by things which I think could be ...
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Re: Marcus Cochran meets Ruth Walsh
This scene is a tender, quietly emotional moment between two lonely kids. The writing balances sadness and warmth without ever being melodramatic. Marcus’ grief, the scorpion coin, and his dream ...
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Re: Lies
Oh god. I am in no position to give an adequate review on this, mainly given the subject matter which I can relate to in parts but not fully, but ...
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Re: Life moves on
I think it's my favourite poem on this site. I loved it, genuinely. I love how maturely the author and ex seemed to handle the situation, I love that it ...
Mar 11 - Re: I don't want to be your friend. Dec 6, 2025
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Re: Small Rituals
This is cute. I was immediately drawn to both the title and the description; it reminds me of when you have just woken up, and nobody else is up yet, ...
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Re: Hallucinating a lover
Beautiful poem. I agree with other readers that the line "I am made entirely of unsent letters" is striking in its tone and originality. My favourite line, however, would have ...
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Re: Flower Unnoticed
Black buzzy bees interests me, because it feels like in a world where hidden beauty is unnoticed, prompting those who possess it to want to stand out like "a star ...
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Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 1
Hello! Emilia here; I recently stumbled onto this beautiful novel, and I must say it is a terrific way of starting it. I loved this chapter, and here are some ...
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Re: Fawn saves Morrigan and December
Hi, Emilia here to give a review! I haven't been on this site in a while, but I thought to revisit it again because why not, and stumbled upon this ...
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Re: Poignantly Yours.
Hello! Emilia here for a review :) First off, I love the varied sentence lengths- there's a fine line between making all the sentences sound the same, and having too ...
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Re: Runaway- chapter 3.
Hello there. Emilia here to review! :) First of, just wanted to say that this is one of the shortest chapters I've ever read in a novel- it's almost like ...
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Re: Marionettes and Mariners
Okay this outlandish contrast between puppets and fishing has really caught my eye, like wow, that is really creative, I'm impressed. Such unusualness has inspired me to write something pretty ...
Dec 29, 2023
