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emilia9ludenberg

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Josefina’s birth

    Hi! Here to leave a short review. One of the most concise short stories I've ever read. But the character layering, emotional intimacy and the consistent wistful tone are haunting ...

    May 30
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Elisa’s origin: Souls and Roses 🧚🏽‍♀️🌸

    Hi there, here to leave a review. Beautiful short story! I love the imagery and atmosphere; the contrast between the idyllic Rosesilk town and the brutality of the massacre. Concise ...

    May 30
  • Script » Fanfiction, Humor Re: Transformers:Heavy Metal UPDATED

    Hi! I'm here to give a review; this was an interesting piece of work. So, I'll start with things that I liked, followed by things which I think could be ...

    May 14
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Marcus Cochran meets Ruth Walsh

    This scene is a tender, quietly emotional moment between two lonely kids. The writing balances sadness and warmth without ever being melodramatic. Marcus’ grief, the scorpion coin, and his dream ...

    Mar 11
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Lies

    Oh god. I am in no position to give an adequate review on this, mainly given the subject matter which I can relate to in parts but not fully, but ...

    Mar 11
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Life moves on

    I think it's my favourite poem on this site. I loved it, genuinely. I love how maturely the author and ex seemed to handle the situation, I love that it ...

    Mar 11
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I don't want to be your friend.

    Dec 6, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Small Rituals

    This is cute. I was immediately drawn to both the title and the description; it reminds me of when you have just woken up, and nobody else is up yet, ...

    Dec 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Hallucinating a lover

    Beautiful poem. I agree with other readers that the line "I am made entirely of unsent letters" is striking in its tone and originality. My favourite line, however, would have ...

    Dec 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Flower Unnoticed

    Black buzzy bees interests me, because it feels like in a world where hidden beauty is unnoticed, prompting those who possess it to want to stand out like "a star ...

    Dec 6, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 1

    Hello! Emilia here; I recently stumbled onto this beautiful novel, and I must say it is a terrific way of starting it. I loved this chapter, and here are some ...

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Fawn saves Morrigan and December

    Hi, Emilia here to give a review! I haven't been on this site in a while, but I thought to revisit it again because why not, and stumbled upon this ...

    Dec 14, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Poignantly Yours.

    Hello! Emilia here for a review :) First off, I love the varied sentence lengths- there's a fine line between making all the sentences sound the same, and having too ...

    Jan 19, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Runaway- chapter 3.

    Hello there. Emilia here to review! :) First of, just wanted to say that this is one of the shortest chapters I've ever read in a novel- it's almost like ...

    Jan 19, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Marionettes and Mariners

    Okay this outlandish contrast between puppets and fishing has really caught my eye, like wow, that is really creative, I'm impressed. Such unusualness has inspired me to write something pretty ...

    Dec 29, 2023


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