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  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: sunshine

    Hello nykolasandrews! I love this poem you wrote. I hope the review I leave is helpful, and I hope you know that imagery is, absolutely, your forte! Incredible job my ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Storm

    Hi there! I enjoyed this poem, especially your rhyme scheme at the end. It's actually raining where I'm at right now so I thought it was very appropriate lol. One ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    Hi Bellarke! I really enjoyed this poem. I could definitely understand the emotions the narrator was feeling through your use of language. Thank you for sharing! One thing that I ...

    Nov 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 4 *rewrite*

    Hello! This was a really good chapter! Of course I didn't read the rest of your story, so I'll be reviewing just the contents of this chapter. Since you said ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Momma's Boy

    Hi Traves! This was really fun to read, and I really liked your distinctive writing style! I'm here with a review to hopefully help you out some, so let's get ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: On Cigarettes and Limerence

    Hi niteowl! (I haven't reviewed in a good bit but I thought I'd give it a try, so thanks for putting up with me (; ) This was a great ...

    Sep 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Whats Beyond the Sea?

    Hello! Before I begin this review, I would like to say that I really loved this concept! It was so pure and creative and I just really liked it. Now ...

    Jun 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: evergreen

    Hello! I haven't done a review in a while, so forgive me if I seem a little rusty-it's because I am lol. I love this poem a lot. I love ...

    May 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wandering Woman

    Hey it’s me

    Apr 2, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Out to Sea

    Hello! First, I have to say, I really love this poem. I love rhyming poems, and your rhymes just came off as very effortless. I also really enjoyed the story ...

    Mar 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Moonlight: Chapter Four

    Hello! I'm going to try and review this chapter without reading the first three, so sorry if I get something wrong due to that. I really liked this chapter, and ...

    Mar 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Humans Are Stars

    Hello! First, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed the meaning of this poem. I thought it was very sweet, and a cute Valentine's Day poem. I really liked ...

    Feb 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: lost in the unreal

    Hello! Before I begin, I would like to say that I really liked this poem. It's clearly filled with emotion, and I appreciate how passionate you were about this poem ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fate

    wOW This is really good. Like, really. The last line was so good and sleepy, if that makes sense. The entire poem just feels warm and bittersweet. I really really ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: aishite

    REVIEW TIME after promising to do it for almost a month I'm sorry I have the memory of Dory from Finding Nemo Ok, first let me say; I really enjoyed ...

    Feb 1, 2018


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott