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  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: sunshine

    Hello nykolasandrews! I love this poem you wrote. I hope the review I leave is helpful, and I hope you know that imagery is, absolutely, your forte! Incredible job my ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Storm

    Hi there! I enjoyed this poem, especially your rhyme scheme at the end. It's actually raining where I'm at right now so I thought it was very appropriate lol. One ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    Hi Bellarke! I really enjoyed this poem. I could definitely understand the emotions the narrator was feeling through your use of language. Thank you for sharing! One thing that I ...

    Nov 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 4 *rewrite*

    Hello! This was a really good chapter! Of course I didn't read the rest of your story, so I'll be reviewing just the contents of this chapter. Since you said ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Momma's Boy

    Hi Traves! This was really fun to read, and I really liked your distinctive writing style! I'm here with a review to hopefully help you out some, so let's get ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: On Cigarettes and Limerence

    Hi niteowl! (I haven't reviewed in a good bit but I thought I'd give it a try, so thanks for putting up with me (; ) This was a great ...

    Sep 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Whats Beyond the Sea?

    Hello! Before I begin this review, I would like to say that I really loved this concept! It was so pure and creative and I just really liked it. Now ...

    Jun 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: evergreen

    Hello! I haven't done a review in a while, so forgive me if I seem a little rusty-it's because I am lol. I love this poem a lot. I love ...

    May 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wandering Woman

    Hey it’s me

    Apr 2, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Out to Sea

    Hello! First, I have to say, I really love this poem. I love rhyming poems, and your rhymes just came off as very effortless. I also really enjoyed the story ...

    Mar 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Moonlight: Chapter Four

    Hello! I'm going to try and review this chapter without reading the first three, so sorry if I get something wrong due to that. I really liked this chapter, and ...

    Mar 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Humans Are Stars

    Hello! First, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed the meaning of this poem. I thought it was very sweet, and a cute Valentine's Day poem. I really liked ...

    Feb 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: lost in the unreal

    Hello! Before I begin, I would like to say that I really liked this poem. It's clearly filled with emotion, and I appreciate how passionate you were about this poem ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fate

    wOW This is really good. Like, really. The last line was so good and sleepy, if that makes sense. The entire poem just feels warm and bittersweet. I really really ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: aishite

    REVIEW TIME after promising to do it for almost a month I'm sorry I have the memory of Dory from Finding Nemo Ok, first let me say; I really enjoyed ...

    Feb 1, 2018


Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity.
— Charles Mingus