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electricbluemonkey

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Andrew--True Story

    I agree. I didn't really get it, but I understand what the general idea is. Its an okay poem, not one of your best, but you should work on it ...

    Feb 5, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Australia and Egypt

    Vevgie, vegie, vegemite! Well, yeah, it is pretty bad. Yeah, I would pick Australia too (the whole project was on Australia, I just had to compare it to some other ...

    Feb 4, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old

    Ooh, thanks everyone. I'm going to write it over again and will have it in a few days. Well, I think the reason its so good (or is it that ...

    Feb 1, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Claret Lion

    *Stares in awe*...Its so...so...magnificent. So awe-inspiring..so, so...perfect. Wow, just wow, that was a very, very good story. I loved it. The descriptions was just wow and the whole depth and ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old

    Wow, thanks. I might rewrite it now, that 5 years have passed. Maybe make it longer and add better description.

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Erode me]

    Yeah, I agree, a big cliche. Some parts I liked, the rest was...okay, but a bit of the poem was just "ugh". It didn't really make much sense to me, ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: 2:04

    I liked it, it was very, very deep and the description was great. I could see what was happening. I loved how you turned such a simple thing into a ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Time]

    All I can say here is that I really liked your style, it was really simple. And I agree with all of the above, thanks to CAG77 I don't need ...

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Oh So Obselete

    I really enjoyed this poem over a short period of time. It was really simple and plain, though. But actually it was a very easy read that made me want ...

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [War]

    Oh, okay, thats been puzzling me for days. The [ ], but I like how you do that, its unique. Yeah, after reading it over again I kind of like ...

    Jan 17, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: Sticks (comic strip)

    Did you make this in a computer program? Or just drew it, because the lines are so perfect and straight...

    Jan 15, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Connection

    Yeah, I think it was pretty good. I really enjoyed it and thought it was very thorough. Really made me think. I will have to agree with everyone else about ...

    Jan 13, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Long Sleeves

    Wow, I love youre style, by the way. Although I don't really know what the whole poem is about, it just kept telling actions that were happening, so I didn't ...

    Jan 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Song of Solomon (Incandescence/CarsandGuitars77)

    Yeah, I like it. I have nothing to say, due to it was...PERFECT! WOW! I love it. Only the last parts were a little awkward due to all the questions ...

    Jan 9, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: Sticks (comic strip)

    Yeah, I liked it. Strange and good at the same time, very funny. I've never actually seen a single-frame (meaning the angle, focus doesn't change) comic strip thats actually good, ...

    Jan 7, 2005


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