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electricbluemonkey

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Andrew--True Story

    I agree. I didn't really get it, but I understand what the general idea is. Its an okay poem, not one of your best, but you should work on it ...

    Feb 5, 2005
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Australia and Egypt

    Vevgie, vegie, vegemite! Well, yeah, it is pretty bad. Yeah, I would pick Australia too (the whole project was on Australia, I just had to compare it to some other ...

    Feb 4, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old

    Ooh, thanks everyone. I'm going to write it over again and will have it in a few days. Well, I think the reason its so good (or is it that ...

    Feb 1, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Claret Lion

    *Stares in awe*...Its so...so...magnificent. So awe-inspiring..so, so...perfect. Wow, just wow, that was a very, very good story. I loved it. The descriptions was just wow and the whole depth and ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old

    Wow, thanks. I might rewrite it now, that 5 years have passed. Maybe make it longer and add better description.

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Erode me]

    Yeah, I agree, a big cliche. Some parts I liked, the rest was...okay, but a bit of the poem was just "ugh". It didn't really make much sense to me, ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: 2:04

    I liked it, it was very, very deep and the description was great. I could see what was happening. I loved how you turned such a simple thing into a ...

    Jan 31, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Time]

    All I can say here is that I really liked your style, it was really simple. And I agree with all of the above, thanks to CAG77 I don't need ...

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Oh So Obselete

    I really enjoyed this poem over a short period of time. It was really simple and plain, though. But actually it was a very easy read that made me want ...

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [War]

    Oh, okay, thats been puzzling me for days. The [ ], but I like how you do that, its unique. Yeah, after reading it over again I kind of like ...

    Jan 17, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: Sticks (comic strip)

    Did you make this in a computer program? Or just drew it, because the lines are so perfect and straight...

    Jan 15, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Connection

    Yeah, I think it was pretty good. I really enjoyed it and thought it was very thorough. Really made me think. I will have to agree with everyone else about ...

    Jan 13, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Long Sleeves

    Wow, I love youre style, by the way. Although I don't really know what the whole poem is about, it just kept telling actions that were happening, so I didn't ...

    Jan 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Song of Solomon (Incandescence/CarsandGuitars77)

    Yeah, I like it. I have nothing to say, due to it was...PERFECT! WOW! I love it. Only the last parts were a little awkward due to all the questions ...

    Jan 9, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: Sticks (comic strip)

    Yeah, I liked it. Strange and good at the same time, very funny. I've never actually seen a single-frame (meaning the angle, focus doesn't change) comic strip thats actually good, ...

    Jan 7, 2005


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)