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Re: Andrew--True Story
I agree. I didn't really get it, but I understand what the general idea is. Its an okay poem, not one of your best, but you should work on it ...
Feb 5, 2005 -
Re: Australia and Egypt
Vevgie, vegie, vegemite! Well, yeah, it is pretty bad. Yeah, I would pick Australia too (the whole project was on Australia, I just had to compare it to some other ...
Feb 4, 2005 -
Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old
Ooh, thanks everyone. I'm going to write it over again and will have it in a few days. Well, I think the reason its so good (or is it that ...
Feb 1, 2005 -
Re: The Claret Lion
*Stares in awe*...Its so...so...magnificent. So awe-inspiring..so, so...perfect. Wow, just wow, that was a very, very good story. I loved it. The descriptions was just wow and the whole depth and ...
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: Old Untitled Short Story That I Wrote When I Was 8 Years Old
Wow, thanks. I might rewrite it now, that 5 years have passed. Maybe make it longer and add better description.
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: [Erode me]
Yeah, I agree, a big cliche. Some parts I liked, the rest was...okay, but a bit of the poem was just "ugh". It didn't really make much sense to me, ...
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: 2:04
I liked it, it was very, very deep and the description was great. I could see what was happening. I loved how you turned such a simple thing into a ...
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: [Time]
All I can say here is that I really liked your style, it was really simple. And I agree with all of the above, thanks to CAG77 I don't need ...
Jan 23, 2005 -
Re: Oh So Obselete
I really enjoyed this poem over a short period of time. It was really simple and plain, though. But actually it was a very easy read that made me want ...
Jan 23, 2005 -
Re: [War]
Oh, okay, thats been puzzling me for days. The [ ], but I like how you do that, its unique. Yeah, after reading it over again I kind of like ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: Sticks (comic strip)
Did you make this in a computer program? Or just drew it, because the lines are so perfect and straight...
Jan 15, 2005 -
Re: Connection
Yeah, I think it was pretty good. I really enjoyed it and thought it was very thorough. Really made me think. I will have to agree with everyone else about ...
Jan 13, 2005 -
Re: Long Sleeves
Wow, I love youre style, by the way. Although I don't really know what the whole poem is about, it just kept telling actions that were happening, so I didn't ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: Song of Solomon (Incandescence/CarsandGuitars77)
Yeah, I like it. I have nothing to say, due to it was...PERFECT! WOW! I love it. Only the last parts were a little awkward due to all the questions ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: Sticks (comic strip)
Yeah, I liked it. Strange and good at the same time, very funny. I've never actually seen a single-frame (meaning the angle, focus doesn't change) comic strip thats actually good, ...
Jan 7, 2005
