electricbluemonkey

Wow. I tried to review that and nitpick it, but it didn't work. I couldn't take anything from it, or add anything in. All I could say is that you ...

*Looks up from eating swiss cheese* YES! YOU PUT DONOVANS NAME IN IT! Uber-coolness! Uhu, you now still got it. Its better than the past 3 or so, almost as ...

Yes, who was this Darla indeed. Hmm, this was worse than the other ones, sorry. The description just isnt there anymore, and the plot is dying down. Its kinda beginning ...

NO! DONT REPLACE DONOVAN WITH A PRONOUN! He has a sexy name...its so cool... But thats still really good, TBR. It still has potential, although I think you should make ...

Indeed he is...(hehe, I'm messing with Hunter a lot today). Well, this still has potential. I kinda think you drifted a bit from the original plot in the first chapter, ...

BTW, love the boyfriend's name--so unique and sexy! Yes it is, Hunter...yes it is...*Pats Hunter on back*. (j/k) Wow, that was great TBR. It had great description, really. It was ...

Wow... :shock: Just... Wow. No, not really "wow" more like..."WO-O-O-OW". That is just amazing. I can't imagine anyone who can write like this. I just can't get over. Its just...wow. ...

Well, actually, I suggest to read The Silmarillion first, but its really, really, really hard. I mean really hard. It tells you some stuff about the roots and stuff of ...

YAY! I know a better version, though: Shave your legs, shave your legs You know you really wanna We should say you need to Shave your legs, shave your legs ...

Haha, those are awesome, Emma. Whoa, if you take out the "Drama" in the picture of the two women, it looks like they are...*cough*...doing...something. But they are great. Nice work. ...

I have never read a poem closer to a Bon Jovi song than that one... Song of the Exile A missing place Within my heart One I cannot escape --- ...

Wow, that was great. It really sounded like a pop/rock song from a girl artist. Really good, I liked it. A good, quick read that I really enjoyed. You worry ...

That was very...different...which is good...I think. The thing that I hated most about this poem was the ending, and the color of the font that you picked. Its really annoying ...

Hmm...I didn't really like the kind of imagery you put in there. It was good at the beginning, then it kind of started branching off into something else, and the ...

That was...different...err...yeah. Sorry to say this, but it was kind of boring at points. I didn't really get the topic and what you are trying to write about. Is it ...