Okay, bulletproof, let's see what you did wrong. Sorry if I'm a bit harsh.
What is the deal with the lack of capitalization? Please capitalize the sentences. And in the last sentence, put some kind of punctuation. Please...and in the last sentence, "if" is "is". Haha, sorry if I was a little bit unnecessary, oh well. Bye, and I hope you still work in the Green Room!
-wisegirl22
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