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Shave your legs

by bulletproof


shave your legs shave your legs
you getting kind of scary being so so harry you better shave your legs
every other day you shave your legs but today
you did not shave your legs so i have to say
if you do not shave your legs its done toay
shave your legs shave your legs
you getting kind of scary being so so harry you better shave your legs

This song if for the black rose


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Sun Aug 03, 2014 4:25 pm
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Okay, bulletproof, let's see what you did wrong. Sorry if I'm a bit harsh. :|

What is the deal with the lack of capitalization? Please capitalize the sentences. And in the last sentence, put some kind of punctuation. Please...and in the last sentence, "if" is "is". Haha, sorry if I was a little bit unnecessary, oh well. Bye, and I hope you still work in the Green Room!

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Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:15 pm
Elizabeth wrote a review...



LOL I was browsing again... read this, laughed again.
And I hate you Colton :)
Hahahaha :P

AND I SHAVEEEEEE NO MORE LEGS WITH A LASER!!!




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Thu May 26, 2005 5:08 pm
Harley says...



so very confusing...




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Thu May 26, 2005 3:22 pm
Armadian says...



WHAT WE ALL TALKING ABOUT!HI COLTON ARE U SURE THIS ISN"T ON A LLAMA!?!?!?!?!?!?




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Thu May 26, 2005 3:16 pm
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Alex quit trying to rain on bulletproof's parade even if it was from Not second third grade get it right i liked it colton it's very funny but who is it about Deanna?????




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Fri May 13, 2005 10:16 pm



Is that a question or a statement? Cause I already made my point.




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Fri May 13, 2005 9:50 pm



Very interesting review...I would say the same thing.




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Fri May 13, 2005 9:47 pm
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My review of this topic:

:| -> :? -> :sick:




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Fri May 13, 2005 9:37 pm
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Llamas? Where did hear that one before...
I think I saw that on a site I went to...
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Thu May 12, 2005 2:16 pm
Kay Kay says...



LOL!! Don't ya know it?




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Wed May 11, 2005 7:23 pm
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I think bulletproof and kay kay are crazy...lol...j/k... :wink:




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Wed May 11, 2005 3:01 pm
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Sure...that's what you want us to think. LOL!




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Tue May 10, 2005 6:21 pm
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Im not very crazy!(chuckle)




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Tue May 10, 2005 5:58 pm
Emma says...



O.o

Ha Ha TBR! :P You have hairy legs! O.o




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Tue May 10, 2005 4:53 pm
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LOL!!! bulletproof you are crazy! It's a very interesting song...makes me wonder about you. LOL!




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Tue May 10, 2005 1:47 am



Very painful...

These are some of these...middle school rhymes that everyone made up.




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Tue May 10, 2005 1:46 am
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Yeah it must be.I don't know though.(^_^)




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Tue May 10, 2005 1:42 am
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...sounds painful.




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Tue May 10, 2005 1:13 am
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This is a song? I didn't know it.




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Tue May 10, 2005 12:41 am
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YAY!

I know a better version, though:

Shave your legs, shave your legs
You know you really wanna
We should say you need to

Shave your legs, shave your legs
Do it with the razor
Or even the taser
Oops, I did with a laser

Shave your legs!


Hehehe, those were good times...good times indeed.




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Tue May 10, 2005 12:29 am
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yesh alex, and then he said that it was the talk of the year. i sent your precious 100 points... back to 10000 with me... no more 11000 :'(




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Tue May 10, 2005 12:26 am
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very funny u should do ur happy dance!




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Tue May 10, 2005 12:05 am
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Umm... I think you've gone off the deep end a little, buddy... We heard this song like in the second grade...




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Tue May 10, 2005 12:03 am
Elizabeth says...



Yeah yeah, i love you too...

yellow bellied land flubber!!

Hmm... i should find that movie and watch it, twas fun....

Yeah and I'll talk to my mom about it....

:hairy: YAY MY LEGS ARE HARRY POTTER

I owe you 100 points




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Mon May 09, 2005 9:20 pm
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OMG! That is sooooo great. I love it. Its funny

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